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11-01-2011, 11:20 AM
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5 Minute Student Ghost Movie
This is a film that I created for a film festival that came to my school. I only had 5 days to shoot, direct, and edit a movie that couldn't be over 5 minutes. This is all was short notice so I do not have the best actors in the world. If you guys could just take a look and maybe leave some feedback. Please only good feedback, I am still in the competition. Feel free to leave your bad feedback on here, I don't mind at all. This contest will help me create this into a better, full made movie.
P.S. I apologize in advanced for the foul language. :rolleyes: http://youtu.be/Rn5VEcgIS-g 
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I feel it was a good attempt, but it's pretty much the Blair Witch project.
Just out of curiosity, was there a script, or was this done by the seat of the pants? Also, I think if you could've done something with the camera to make the picture look muddled or out of focus like it was actually recovered from a river, it would've been a little better. If they were walking somewhere or trying to get out of the situation, it could've been a little more suspenseful. Overall, not bad for a 5 minute mini, but it just needed more attention to detail, and the foul language doesn't really add anything. I'm not trying to sound negative, just posting my observations. I'd say try it again and re-post with some changes. I think you could do very well. Devil is in the details amigo. :)
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