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08-29-2006, 01:31 PM
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"Little, vicious minds abound with anger and revenge, and are incapable of feeling the pleasure of forgiving their enemies." Earl of Chesterfield "A man that studieth revenge keeps his own wounds green, which otherwise would heal and do well." Francis Bacon Last edited by Roderick Usher; 09-14-2007 at 06:42 AM. 
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Very good. Grabbed my interest right off, and the writing flows well. Nice job.
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I'll kill you and your dreams tonight Begin new life Bleed your death upon me Let your bloodline feed my youth ------------------------------ Ssshhh....did you hear that?
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09-01-2006, 08:10 AM
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"Little, vicious minds abound with anger and revenge, and are incapable of feeling the pleasure of forgiving their enemies." Earl of Chesterfield "A man that studieth revenge keeps his own wounds green, which otherwise would heal and do well." Francis Bacon Last edited by Roderick Usher; 09-14-2007 at 06:43 AM.
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09-16-2006, 01:50 PM
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gonna have to buy it:D
that is, when I finally finish it. Needless to say there will be madness and blood and viscera.:eek:
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"Little, vicious minds abound with anger and revenge, and are incapable of feeling the pleasure of forgiving their enemies." Earl of Chesterfield "A man that studieth revenge keeps his own wounds green, which otherwise would heal and do well." Francis Bacon
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09-17-2006, 06:54 AM
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i'll pay just to get an advance copy :D
you gonna try to get it made? reads like it would make a great movie
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