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03-11-2006, 09:51 AM
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Hmm, spur of the moment story idea i thought up, feel free to bash or praise, feedback welcomed.
this isnt the whole thing, just some parts and the basis. A man and his newlywed wife were driving down the highway on the way to their honeymoon, somewhere in the mountainous northern california. Not sure why yet, or how, but they end up in the middle of the mountains completely lost, and pretty soon everything seems to go insane. The region is filled with spirits and demons, driving the 2 to insanity. All they have is one gun and 6 bullets for it, but there's nothing to shoot at, its apparently all in their head. I haven't thought out the whole plot line of the insanity and stuff, but eventually the man starts seeing 2 of his wife, and one is a demon and confusing the hell out of him, then he sees more of himself, and more demonic things all around, near the end he finds a one laned road, and after ditching his wife and running, the 2 *wives* runs out of the woods frantically screaming shoot her, and i'm the real wife and all that cliche stuff, and he's completely lost and mindless that he shoots both of them. You then find out that the man who shot them is actually the demon of the real man, and the real guy comes out, and he shoots him too. Then he freaks out, and has no idea what's going on, and he shoots himself too. It then goes over to a hospital, where an obviously troubled man was found crawling dirty and bloody through the woods of mountainous northern california, and had just shot himself in the head in the hospital, right after screaming and mumbling something about demons. comments? Kinda have to think through the ending stuff a few times before you get it i think.
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03-11-2006, 10:28 AM
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Its probobly the best idea Ive ever heard from you Posher. Keep working on it.
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alright, if you think its good, i'll try and work something out.
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03-12-2006, 11:07 AM
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It sounds pretty interesting. Keep working on it. I'd like to see it made into a movie.
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03-12-2006, 11:09 AM
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Yeah, none of the stuff I write would make a good book, I only care about making movies anyway. Thanks;)
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Definatly a good idea man!
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Thanks, it just needs some tweaking.
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brill best idea ive so in a while
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thats sooo cool posher!
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