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i can tell u two are well into your writing, when i read the story i dint notice any mistakes until you mentioned it. but my writing is so bad anyway.
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It kept my attention which is a big plus and I really enjoyed the idea you explored in it. A Very pleasant to read-cheers :)
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Villain, I don't know how I missed this! I really liked your story!
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I really appreciate the feedback. Lately i've found it really hard to write and i havent even been able to edit the novel i just finished so it really means alot that you liked it. Hopefully ill be able to write some more soon. |
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