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			i can tell u two are well into your writing, when i read the story i dint notice any mistakes until you mentioned it. but my writing is so bad anyway.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
		
	
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			It kept my attention which is a big plus and I really enjoyed the idea you explored in it. A Very pleasant to read-cheers :)
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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			Villain, I don't know how I missed this!  I really liked your story!
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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 I really appreciate the feedback. Lately i've found it really hard to write and i havent even been able to edit the novel i just finished so it really means alot that you liked it. Hopefully ill be able to write some more soon.  | 
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