Is It Dark Enough???

[cole]

Originally posted by she_died
Nope. I think I should change my avatar to a picture of a penis. My handle probably is confusing a lot of people lol

Congrats on graduating film school:)

[cole]

Originally posted by she_died
Not bad, I'd say. The last line is a little clunky, and breaks the meter; I think you could make it a little leaner and meaner. Also "Emotions run high" seems out of place to me. Overall, you've got a cool vibe, nothing to spit at, to be sure. Keep writing!

Cheers...I'm 26 year old ...still learning the ropes of it all. "Emotions run high" ...All study and play with and no sleep can sometimes cause mixes of a crappy line or two. Your feed back is appriciated :cool:

cole

[cole]

Originally posted by trippin_the_rif
welcome and please forgive the red headed step-children?:rolleyes:

Hey Trippin_ the_ rif

Thanks for ur welcome. As for your rules and conditions
1. Doesn't every house hold contain 1 or more hustler (or some other nudie mag?) lol.
2. goatees r cool...just about every guy I know including my brothers have one. Don't b a slave to the shave!!!
3.Sane...? Insane...? it's all good,we all have our moments.lol.

Everone is special in their own unique way!!!

Peace
cole


:D

[cole]

Originally posted by zomb5150
Did You ever kiss a boy and accidently burp in His mouth?:D

no!!!lol!!!have u???:confused:

[cole]

Originally posted by she_died
Nope. I think I should change my avatar to a picture of a penis. My handle probably is confusing a lot of people lol

Isn't that one of the five food groups?.:confused: lol.

[cole]

Originally posted by RavageRitual
Shine Divine Chime Clime
Wish I could Rhyme

Play Day Say Pay
Wish I was by the Bay

Im sorry cole, Its still really eary here in PA, im not woke up yet, I thought it was good. oh and ugh I hope you stay a member and dont just get the feedback from this post and leave forever.

Did you write the body in the shed poem???It's very good...grewsomely curious!!!

cole:)

[VampiricClown]

Alright, first off, Welcome to HDC.

Secondly, The poem is good, but it still needs work.

Originally posted by cole
no!!!lol!!!have u???:confused:

And thirdly, just chill a little. I don't think he was saying that to you. I could be wrong, but I think he was talking to "she_died". Oh! And you might try quoting all of the peoples posts in just one of yours.

Later

VC

[cole]

Originally posted by VampiricClown
Alright, first off, Welcome to HDC.

Secondly, The poem is good, but it still needs work.




And thirdly, just chill a little. I don't think he was saying that to you. I could be wrong, but I think he was talking to "she_died". Oh! And you might try quoting all of the peoples posts in just one of yours.

Later

VC

Sorry...This is the first time I've actually been in a forum and I'm still figuring out the do's and don't. Thanks for the heads up about replying in one post...I didn't know!!!:cool: