H3D Script SAMPLE, dialogue needs help i believe, but over all story in the end,ROCKS

[MichaelMyers]

Here is the scene I mentioned above from Friday 13th III, which was released theatrically in 3D.

[H3orH3D_Script4U]

Love it! I want to see mine though, as it retracts and just don't quite fit back in its socket, and then plops off.
I kind of want to hear the sounds they will apply to it. :D



I'll go ahead and put alittle more up here, the way I wrote it. It's not as suspensful as it would be watching it, I kind of had alot of explaining to do. And had trouble with getting it out a little in my opinion

[H3orH3D_Script4U]

LAURIE eventually realizes it's useless to struggle, she
can't escape his strength. And just as you see the
acceptance in her eyes, she looks into MICHAEL's eyes.

MICHAEL jumps from the roof with LAURIE still in his
arms.

Once they’re in midair it begins going in SLOW MOTION as
they fall.

It then shows an image of SHERRIFF BRACKETT pulling up
in front of the building, underneath where LAURIE and
MICHAEL are falling, right passed JAKE's body.

It shows a shot of SHERRIFF BRACKETTS face looking up as
he sees them falling towards him, he gasps.

It then shows a shot above MICHAEL and LAURIE as their
bodies are falling towards the SHERRIFF's car.

It then picks back up to LIVE SPEED as they collide,
with the vehicle's roof, towards the screen, and as
they do the scene goes immediately black. (V.O.)

LAURIE/MICHAEL's MOTHER (V.O.)
Laurie, its mother. The pale horse
will lead you home, and Michael is
that pale horse, and it's his job
to bring you home. (pause)
He can't rest, until he does. But
right now I need you to wake up.
Wake up! Laurie

Use this dialogue to continue the movie!

But If you want it to end for good, at the LINE.
(BUT NOW I NEED YOU TO WAKE UP, remove that and
everything after, and replace it with.) WELCOME HOME,
LAURIE!

(You can end it here and series over, or go on and not
piss the fans off so much, and it can leave it open to
remake Halloween 4 :)

CUT TO:

SCENE #22 IT WAS ALL A DREAM

(Not sure how you'll want, to do this but I’ll give you
two ways, both good in my opinion. Immediately
following the V.O. take one image from each scene cut,
quickly rewind it with the sound of high speed rewind
all the way past this movie to the previous movie to the
scene in the cabin, once there the following scene takes
place. Or you can just have it like someone is quickly
waking up from being unconscious into the next scene.)

(INT.) HADDONFIELD - CRIME SCENE - CABIN - OPEN FIELD -
NIGHT:

If you do the rewind thing up above it stops, as Michael
lays an unconscious LAURIE on the table in the cabin.

IF you don't do the rewind thing, Michael immediately
tries to begin stabbing LAURIE on the table, But she
alertly wakes up taking her mother’s advice, and rolls
off the table onto the floor.

It then goes to a scene outside the CABIN as DR. LOOMIS
is about to enter.

CUT TO: :confused:

I was thinking at the beginning when I did the flashbacks of H2's ending THAT I should add a scene where she is on the TABLE unconscious, Shaking her head as if she is dreaming first before the flash where she screams.

NOW the CRITICISM begins. Did I ruin it? Alot of the posts in WORST endings I seen a lot of you hate the dream sequence ending. But don't know how else DR. LOOMIS can live, in which he was in #4 and it adds meaning to Michael's intentions and a reason why he seems invicible to death, with THEIR MOTHER'S dialogue, since he can't stop until he brings her HOME! And I believe it's symbolic to MICHAEL'S self sacrifice at the end when he LEAPS OFF with her.

There is one more TWIST and DR. LOOMIS using his PSYCHIATRY trying to explain LAURIE's vivid DREAM. quite of bit still resolved after this.

The twist won't be too much of a surprise to older fans, as it is a part of the overall story. But the newer fans will be like, what a fucked up FAMILY.

It's Funny because I didn't think about it until now. But I have a little BIT of NIGHTMARE ON ELM ST., with the dream. FRIDAY THE 13TH some of the deaths, the morgue enviroment in JASON GOES TO HELL, and OFCOURSE HALLOWEEN. I think this one would do pretty good in the theaters, I WANNA SEE IT! But ofcourse I do!

(MichaelMyers) I know you want to kill me. But that's your damn JOB! :D


Where is my HORROR OSCAR? lol:p

[H3orH3D_Script4U]

I also think it's symbolic that after the long 2 days of SHERRIFF BRACKETT that he shows up just a little too late as they are in MID AIR and he is helpless towards LAURIE. Tried to make that moment come out with the SLOW MOTION SHOT of his face. I personally like the symbolic ending that would end it for GOOD, with the last lines WELCOME HOME.
But I imagine a BOUNTY would be put out on my head for that one!

To me Halloween 3 is completely wide open to go in many directions, like I said since he was'nt in it and it's that missing chapter, as long as it stays within the original story!

The few scenes after this you do run into a few people LAURIE saw in her DREAM, kind of a premonition thing going on. And I kind of like in that sense THE FINAL LEAPING OFF THE ROOF, since that is where the real final confrontation between MICHAEL and LAURIE that happens in resurrection on the ROOFTOP, little symbolic there also. KIND of a vision of the FUTURE in the dream of what is to come for her!

If you want the BOOBIES and the HORNY GIRL to DIE. Then I would have MICHAEL open the back door grab her by her hair, and then squish her head in the CAR DOOR! SOUND GOOD! :D


:eek:

[MichaelMyers]

OK....

When I read the ending I at first choked on my drink and cried out in shock. But now I am :cool:.

I am fine with the dream ending, it was basically the only way out at that point without killing Laurie. I am glad "horny girl" did not ride into save the day.:D

BUT....

Making Michael Myers into some kind of anti-hero is in my mind a serious act of creative license that I do not feel good about tonight. Michael Myers is a VILLIAN, he is a demented slasher. :madmad: He is not a guardian angel guiding Laurie Strode to her heavenly "home!" Michael Myers is in hell with Jason, Freddy, and the rest of them!! I am going to re-read this ending before bed, sleep on it, and see how I feel about it tomorrow. But currently I think it takes MM in a direction that is significantly different from his character in the rest of the franchise (as a savior of sorts).

The only way this could be made more daring is if you roll credits playing the Halloween theme on banjo (though I always thought it could use some percussion/bass!).

I conclude with this remark: oddly, in trying to make a more "faithful" Halloween III, H3orH3D_Script4U may have made one that is even more controversial than Season of the Witch!

[H3orH3D_Script4U]

Love that take on it!

Read a lot of reviews on ZOMBIES H2, and seen a lot of BAD ONES as I know this would have also.

I tried to MAKE the PALE HORSE statement have more meaning and LAURIE's mother SERVE more of a purpose and clarity to her ROLE, between the two.

The next few scenes you will see the fear LAURIE still has for MICHAEL and that she has a BUN in the oven, I develope DR. LOOMIS alittle bit and a small relationship beginning to start with ANGEL/LAURIE and his take on her mind creating JAKE and other issues she has, since in 2 she just figured out that MICHAEL was her BROTHER, so I attempted to show her MENTAL STATE a little bit, and it ends with MICHAEL handcuffed to a hospital bed all wrapped up in the RIDGEMONT FEDERAL SANITARIUM, perfect lead into the beginning of the old #4.

I think with the ending I really tried to please the older fans and keep the younger ones interests.

ZOMBIE made it hard to bring it back for a 3 with the killing of LOOMIS, unless you completely run from the old story. So I did go way out there on that very small limb with many chances, definitely interesting, and I will never see MICHAEL as an angel by any means, personally.

100% honestly it almost wrote itself, and never did anything like it. Kind of freaked me out a little bit.

And yeah I want to RE-NIG my comment about standing over the ABYSS. here it is

Thats' exactly where I was when I wrote it, didn't know what to do. So I said hell with it and just threw them off the DAMN building. :D

I thought about having SHERRIFF BRACKETT come out on the roof top and shooting him. But the first thought with the DREAM appealed to me more, and my MIND immediately went 2 scenes ahead with that idea.

[H3orH3D_Script4U]

MICHAEL, slept on it. And NOW he likes it !!!

Cause I threatened him, and SCARED him !!! :D

SURE I DID!!! RIGHT ! :rolleyes:

I have a POLL, in the GENERAL FORUM.

If you're not a member create an ACCOUNT and let me know how you feel, by voting in it !!!

It is Private, so no one will know it's you !!!

If you're a BIG WIG, that's also a way you can contact me through an E-MAIL in My User Page .

[MichaelMyers]

Did the call go through today?

[H3orH3D_Script4U]

Kind of a hectic day 2day !!!

Tomorrow !!! I promise, I'll find something new out, or get the hush treatment, that they don't want the public to know, that they are in progress with one already !!!

I seen they took down the other CAT POST THREAD, with our little Freddy and Jason vs. Michael CONVO !!!

Just watched Freddy vs. Jason again and never even thought about it, but the MAIN GIRLS name in it was LORI, spelled different, yes !!! But it ties together so well, can't be a coincidence !!!

I can already see FREDDY saying,

"I know someone else, that's after a little BITCH named LAURIE" !!!

Still it will be very difficult to pull of a Script on that one.

Don't think it would be so SCARY, as it would just be more entertaining !!!

They were headed for this CLASH all a long !!!

[MichaelMyers]

Never noticed that. Definitely not a coincidence. The ball on this next project has to get rolling after H3D. I want to see these guys duke it out on the big screen then my life is complete!