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03-06-2011, 09:32 AM
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Hello There
Hello, I'm an aspiring film maker and I am taking part in an A level course in which we are to create the opening 2 mins of a feature length horror film. So far we have made a rough cut which can be seen below, and we would really appreciate any feedback on it! Bare in mind it is a rough cut so dont expect all of the footage to be in the final cut. We are also to be reshooting a few shots including the ending because we do not think it works!.
I have a youtube channel with things such as behind the scenes footage and any earlier rough cuts, so feel free to have a quick look. Yes we are amateurs so dont expect it to be top class, we are looking for any help we can get off you guys! I also have a blog on my work so far which can be seen here www.rob-shaw1994.blogspot.com Anyway like I said would appreciate anything saying what we could improve on/film again or leave out. Thanks very much! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PUkbC...el_video_title Last edited by Alienspanner; 03-06-2011 at 09:35 AM. 
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03-07-2011, 12:10 AM
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Hi and welcome to the forum. The only thing I can put my finger on with your video is that first scene with the red car, it is a very nice and friendly color and it do not really put me in horror mood, perhaps a bit of mud or such on it would make the starting visual less friendly. Other than that it seams fun.
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03-07-2011, 03:19 AM
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Welcome aboard and good luck with your project :)
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03-07-2011, 07:52 AM
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Ah I see what you are getting at there! Thanks for that i'll have to bear that in mind :) Thanks for the welcome too! :)
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