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05-12-2004, 05:50 PM
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Well it doesn't really matter that much, there is always a first time to everything. It doesn't matter if a person isn't terrific at something as long as they get the general idea and keep an audience well into it then it will be fine. The main thing a writer of scripts for films or whatever has to pay attention to is the intrigue and interest of the story. What makes it so great? Will the audience stay awake for the whole duration of the film?
Intrigue is something that is of great importance and shouldn't be ignored. To catch the audience's attention you have to try and make the story of the film interesting and most of all intriging so that they won't get bored and enjoy it. I'm only an amateur writer but I thought that you wouldn't mind some advice seeing as you seem so down on yourself. You can send me the script via e-mail and I can read it and give feedback on it for you. I don't criticise other people's work so don't feel too obliged. ________ VTR250 Last edited by death_to_all; 01-21-2011 at 02:11 AM. 
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05-12-2004, 05:52 PM
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05-16-2004, 10:27 AM
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I have a little advice for you MVP. Rent all the hellraiser movies before you do anything. have you seen any halloween movies
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05-16-2004, 02:26 PM
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sorry MVP but i have to agree with the collector on this one. it seems that you haven't the slightest idea what Hellraiser and Halloween are about. i advise you to watch the movies and then rewrite the script in a totally different way. it has no real story line, well it does sort of but it doesn't make a lot of sense. well at least you tried thats one thing.
________ marijuana sativa Last edited by death_to_all; 01-21-2011 at 02:12 AM.
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05-16-2004, 08:01 PM
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Couldnt have said it better myself
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05-18-2004, 04:36 AM
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I own all the halloween and hellraiser movies now, and I see that it doesnt make much sense. Right now I am doing the script over. It shall take place in 1978. The only other thing I can say is that is has a lot to do with Hellraiser 3 and Halloween: The Curse of Michael Myers.
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05-18-2004, 04:39 AM
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I am also using this script to make an actual hour and a half movie with like 20 of my friends. So far I made a couple props including a puzzle box and ball. In this movie all forms of the box will come into play. Any other suggestions or questions please post.
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05-18-2004, 10:43 AM
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It shouyld just be pinhead, because he is a pussy if he has the other cenobites fighting to
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05-18-2004, 07:36 PM
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Yeah just put Pinhead in it the other Cenobites aren't as scary and are really annoying.
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