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Whorer
Because i AM a total whore, i am posting this here, too.
Check out my site updates :) http://scaredyet.net/
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I read only one story, but from that, your dialogue does little to provide insight into any of the characters. In a short story, that's one of few ways to do so. Work on that.
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Which story did you read, btw?
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