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				The Process of Elimination
			 
			
			I have written a 5 page script to enter in a contest this month.  It's not horror, but there's killing in it.  It's a hitman script called The Process of Elimination.  If anyone would like to look it over and offer their brutally honest opinion (If you think it sucks, I want to know about it and if you can pinpoint why you think it sucks then even better because I still have a week to fix it.), it'd be greatly appreciated. Note: This is a completely different script than the one discussed in the logline thread in the general forum. 
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			Can I read it?
		 
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			Sure, I'll send it over. One thing I should mention... The only rule for the contest is this... Monologue: The script can contain as many characters as you want, but only 1 of them can have any lines. 
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