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01-21-2005, 09:40 PM
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like poems?
Ok i know theres an art section for this crap but who really looks there anyways.
So i wrote two poems during the summer and well here they are This is my first poem, so i dont know who good it really is. Lazy Hazy Days of Summer by Jay summer night im so bored walk on over to her front door ring the bell her she comes now its time to have some fun grab her hand away we go above our heads flies the crow drive up to the moutain peak i grab the knife that i have sneaked stab her 19 times of gore now she lie apon moutain floor and thats the first one. so critique it please, and maybe ill give my poem that is dedicated and inspired by Ted Bundy
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01-22-2005, 04:32 AM
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Ummm...it's very dark. It has a Nick Cave edge to it, thats for sure.
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01-22-2005, 04:54 AM
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That was cool in its own way. I could actually see it all happening which was cool.
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01-22-2005, 07:59 AM
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My favorite poems have always been by Sakespeare and Edgar Allan Poe.
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 Favorite Band: Black Sabbath Second Fav Band: Pink Floyd Favorite Non Horror Movie: Papillon 5 Fav Horror Authors: Stephen King, Anne Rice, Edgar Allan Poe, H. P. Lovecraft, and Mary Shelley.
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01-22-2005, 01:39 PM
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Wow
Thats really good! Cree[y...but thats what makes it so kool!
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Buy them! They're at your local grocer now!
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01-22-2005, 02:28 PM
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I was in a musical last year, and my character was Master Fish. These two girls who are like 9 years old [Also the cast] recited that whenever they saw me. It was really odd.
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