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#1
05-29-2004, 08:45 PM
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Any Lyricists Here?
How about our lyric/poetry writers on here huh? Anyone got some lyrics to share?
I'll go first, from a new song im workin on: Will you look where we're headed, Christ, look where we've been. Hold your flag up high, in pride, and Bury our children. Thats probably gonna be the chorus (think "wish you were here") anywho, anyone else got anything to contribute? 
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05-30-2004, 03:47 AM
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Heres some
Will you come with me my darling Flying high were in the clear Always dreaming of your smile walk the night with me and hold me (tight)harmony Through it all youve always been there Now I know that we have made it will you come with me my darling walk the night with me and hold me tight. Walk the night with me and hold me tight. Walk the night with me and hold me tight As we find our way together Ill be thinking always of you tell me that you never leave me take my hand and let me lead you will you come with me my darling walk the night with me and hold me tight. walk the night with me and hold me tight walk the night with me and hold me tight. What do you think?
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06-01-2004, 03:21 AM
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Nice job, i like the harmony note there, helped me picture it alot more like a song....it IS a song right?...id like to get some mp3 action on it if it is....pretty nice little love ballad ya got there Mr.psycho....
Alright since its just you and me on this site writing lyrics apparently, ill go with a love ballad to match ya.... One Lost Moment Verse1 Too broken, To even try, Pretend this love, is a lie. Transcend the pain we both knew *wispered* (everytime.....i close my eyes...) I Still See You Bridge -- (waltz) See you dance... I still see you... See you dance... Verse 2 Somehow we, Got lost at sea. Desperatly close to the shore. Abandonded our ship premature. *wispered (everytime.....i close my eyes....) I Still See Your... Bridge2--(waltz) Shadow. Dance across.....this.....wall. Something so quaint and tivial's what i miss...most...of all. Chorus - Heavy guitar I'll never stop believing in you... I'll never stop believing in you... Through all the shit you put me through, I'll never stop believing in you... Outro For a moment there.....i lost myself in you, For a moment........there was nothing i wouldn't do. For a moment there.....i lost myself in you, For a moment.........there was nothing i couldn't do......for you. Well? whatcha think?
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06-01-2004, 02:41 PM
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snif... snif...
sorry what was the question ? :p seriously though... very beautiful you guys.
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06-02-2004, 11:53 PM
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No seriously, thanks alot Hellfire....i wish we could get some more action in this thread tho.....no lyricists here:(
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#6
06-03-2004, 11:27 AM
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i've been writing since i was a kid but i don't consider myself a lyricist... just screwing around, writing what comes into my head... not going to post that shit here to get the hell flamed outta me :D :p and i'm probably not alone on this !
so kudos to you guys for daring to dare ! lol
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06-03-2004, 12:51 PM
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06-14-2004, 03:35 PM
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ok arioch, since you're so set on keeping this thread alive ( lol ), here's a little something i thought of :
hey loneliness step through my door i've tasted you i'm ready for a little more hey lost highway let's go for a ride i'm free for anything yeah, i'm ready to slide
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