Any Lyricists Here?
 

How about our lyric/poetry writers on here huh? Anyone got some lyrics to share?

I'll go first, from a new song im workin on:

Will you look where we're headed,
Christ, look where we've been.
Hold your flag up high, in pride, and
Bury our children.



Thats probably gonna be the chorus (think "wish you were here") anywho, anyone else got anything to contribute?

Heres some

Will you come with me my darling
Flying high were in the clear
Always dreaming of your smile
walk the night with me and hold me (tight)harmony
Through it all youve always been there
Now I know that we have made it
will you come with me my darling
walk the night with me and hold me tight.
Walk the night with me and hold me tight.
Walk the night with me and hold me tight
As we find our way together
Ill be thinking always of you
tell me that you never leave me
take my hand and let me lead you
will you come with me my darling
walk the night with me and hold me tight.
walk the night with me and hold me tight
walk the night with me and hold me tight.


What do you think?

Nice job, i like the harmony note there, helped me picture it alot more like a song....it IS a song right?...id like to get some mp3 action on it if it is....pretty nice little love ballad ya got there Mr.psycho....

Alright since its just you and me on this site writing lyrics apparently, ill go with a love ballad to match ya....

One Lost Moment

Verse1
Too broken,
To even try,
Pretend this love,
is a lie.
Transcend the pain we both knew
*wispered* (everytime.....i close my eyes...)

I Still See You
Bridge -- (waltz)
See you dance...
I still see you...
See you dance...

Verse 2
Somehow we,
Got lost at sea.
Desperatly close
to the shore.
Abandonded our ship premature.
*wispered (everytime.....i close my eyes....)

I Still See Your...
Bridge2--(waltz)
Shadow.
Dance across.....this.....wall.
Something so quaint and tivial's
what i miss...most...of all.

Chorus - Heavy guitar
I'll never stop believing in you...
I'll never stop believing in you...
Through all the shit you put me through,
I'll never stop believing in you...

Outro
For a moment there.....i lost myself in you,
For a moment........there was nothing i wouldn't do.

For a moment there.....i lost myself in you,
For a moment.........there was nothing i couldn't do......for you.




Well? whatcha think?

snif... snif...



sorry what was the question ? :p



seriously though... very beautiful you guys.

Heh....he started it!!with his whole love song there....i can love with the best of them ya know.....BETTER some would say....:p

No seriously, thanks alot Hellfire....i wish we could get some more action in this thread tho.....no lyricists here:(

i've been writing since i was a kid but i don't consider myself a lyricist... just screwing around, writing what comes into my head... not going to post that shit here to get the hell flamed outta me :D :p and i'm probably not alone on this !


so kudos to you guys for daring to dare ! lol

Hey i dont think you should worry about getting flammed hellfirst, just look how few people are actually veiwing this thread, let alone responding......but i can understand your hesitation, still it would be nice to see some of your stuff...

Just bumping this thread for any members who dont suck and look in the music forum:p...

ok arioch, since you're so set on keeping this thread alive ( lol ), here's a little something i thought of :

hey loneliness
step through my door
i've tasted you
i'm ready for a little more

hey lost highway
let's go for a ride
i'm free for anything
yeah, i'm ready to slide

Hey i like it Hellfire....nice personification given to the highway and loneliness....very classy....goodform...