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12-16-2005, 04:12 AM
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Is It Dark Enough???
Hi, to all the horror fans. I'm currently studing 'writing' and hopefully one of my novels or scripts when finished will take off one day...I've been practising my so called 'art' in form of novel writing, poetry and lyrical rhymes.
This is the first piece of poetry I'm displaying to the public and would like the truth...if u like it ...GREAT... but if u don't...thats fine too; you will only help strenghten my back bone!!! Here goes: The darkened cloud covers the moon that shines Smothering coulor and all that is devine Evil delivers midnight as the clock chimes Shadows crawl and start to climb. The dead will soon come out to play Emotions run high from the murder of the day Tears now fall from 'blood shed' they say Truth is hidden; protecting those who will eventually pay. Cheers for the feedback -cole- 
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12-16-2005, 04:22 AM
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Shine Divine Chime Clime
Wish I could Rhyme Play Day Say Pay Wish I was by the Bay Im sorry cole, Its still really eary here in PA, im not woke up yet, I thought it was good. oh and ugh I hope you stay a member and dont just get the feedback from this post and leave forever.
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Hang the body in the shed Using meat-hooks through the legs Catch the blood as it drips from the stump Like the others from the past The naked belly, full of cysts Smells so good, I cant resist I know inside this ones the best As I eat the rotting chest
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12-16-2005, 04:54 AM
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Hell, im getting ready to go to school right now.
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Hang the body in the shed Using meat-hooks through the legs Catch the blood as it drips from the stump Like the others from the past The naked belly, full of cysts Smells so good, I cant resist I know inside this ones the best As I eat the rotting chest
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12-16-2005, 06:34 AM
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Re: Is It Dark Enough???
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12-16-2005, 08:28 AM
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Nope. I think I should change my avatar to a picture of a penis. My handle probably is confusing a lot of people lol
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