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I havent pimped in a while....
http://popcultureobservations.today.com/
This is my blog. I will get paid if you go there and tell me how wrong my opinion is or that you think think i am kick-ass awesome so I should write more or anything in between. |
this is a dissapointment.
when i saw the thread title i was hoping you were selling some of your ass ... and i already bought roses !! |
I'll wait till you actually post something...
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OH SNAP....I went there |
Not directed at Vod directly here, but to bloggers in general-
Don't start your blog with a post that says- Hi, I'm just an average guy, and um, I'm gonna write about some stuff, when I figure out what.... Come out with your guns blazing. Would you read a book that started like that? Would you come back to a blog like that? |
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http://www.logosportswear.com/embroi...Owl.SCH067.jpg did I mention "old" |
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try it again. No more stupid boring intro, just, Guns Blazing :)
http://popcultureobservations.today.com/ |
I'm going to have to disagree with Neverending here, I think you should have an intro, Vod. It can be a short one, but I think you should state your intent. What are you going to be writing about? Will it just be about guns?
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Much better- does your blog have spellcheck?
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Make your blog compelling from the get go- otherwise, why should I read it over the 18 trillion other blogs out there? |
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i still think he should be pimping his fine ass.
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As far as an intro, i will be expanding the "about me" page to explain why I am bothering. Quote:
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Or i will have to start a new one: Fat Fingered Retard. |
Very interesting blog.
"Ol Painless", GE hand-held M134 Minigun http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/h...-2_minigun.jpg |
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Oh, and lest you think my pimping would end with a simple blog, check out my article for Associated Content: http://www.associatedcontent.com/art...if.html?cat=40 it is the first official time i have been published, so its kind of a big deal to me :D |
Congrats on the publication.
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That way what you're saying makes sense..... I hope it doesn't seem like I'm picking on you- mistakes in published works are a pet peeve of mine. |
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I appreciate the feedback and i am flattered you read it thoroughly enough to catch that :) I guess I'll have to proofread better., For what its worth, I am taking it as constructive criticism, which only makes me better, |
Do you get stats on how often your articles are used?
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I often find spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in books. The biggest one being "till". I've said this before, when you mean the shortened form of "until", it must be spelt like this "'til". Because it is an abbreviation. It has an apostrophe and one "l", as the work "until" does.
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NE, I think so. I get paid a buck for the first 100+ word post I do every day, then 2 cents for every view or comment (now i dont remember) for the blog, and $1.50 for every 1000 views of my article(s) from associated content, so both must have a way to track how often it gets looked at. Although if my time spent over at cracked.com has taught me anything, its to keep your eyes peeled for plagarism. Several of the writers over there have had their stuff copied without credit by other sites. word to the wise, if you ever copy and paste from cracked.com, give them credit. You will get a nasty email if you dont. |
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NOOOOOOOOO! |
oh, and on both the blog and the article, feel free to (which means PLEASE) comment there too.:)
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more bloggage:
http://popcultureobservations.today.com/ Oh, and if there is a subject you would like me to write on, just post it here and I will take a look. |
http://www.associatedcontent.com/art...?page=4&cat=40
i got another one published :) |
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