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tic
09-27-2007, 09:12 AM
My fate is in your hands kid, you work it out

Sorry but is that not just a classic line :D

Rayne
09-27-2007, 09:25 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Disease
09-27-2007, 09:28 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Did you take you're happy pills today:eek:

Rayne
09-27-2007, 09:37 AM
Did you take you're happy pills today:eek:Nah...I've been in a generally good mood lately...I think it's because I can smell Fall in the air, and Halloween is almost here...Ahhh...I can spread my wings now :)

Disease
09-27-2007, 09:40 AM
So many smilies, yes halloween is near, I bought a pumpkin for carving yesterday. maybe a bit premature but it should hold up.

The Rob Zombie version opens here tomorrow, I have been avoiding all the threads about it so I could draw my own conclusion....

I might go after the record fair in the morning.

tic
09-27-2007, 09:43 AM
I got a Tax Refund Today, Yay PARTY!!!

erh ........ Sorry wrong thread.

Rayne
09-27-2007, 09:45 AM
So many smiliesHaHa, yes...It's a terrible habit, but I can't escape it...It's because I'm so expressive when I speak, and you can't see me talk here, so I end up putting in the smilies instead:o

Disease
09-27-2007, 09:46 AM
I can imagine though.

Disease
09-27-2007, 09:47 AM
I got a Tax Refund Today, Yay PARTY!!!

erh ........ Sorry wrong thread.

Lets go to the pub, ;) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ferretchucker
09-27-2007, 12:43 PM
Rob Zombies halloween comes out here on the 29th. I'll have to wait til it's on DVD or I get a pirate copy. I'm looking forward to reading tommorows segment too. What will ferret come up with next?

ferretchucker
09-28-2007, 11:59 AM
Opening credits role. The song has changed from "Like a bat outta hell" to a song made specifiacally for the show. The last scene from the last episode plays. It carries on. Tic is in his car, driving quickly.

Tic: Come on, come on! Move.

He moves his hand to where the walkie-talkie would be, then realises he's in his own car. He picks up his phone. He dials. Cut to horrorobsessed living room.

Mothman: Call a doctor!

Phantomstranger: Why? She'll die anyway. that reminds me. Move.

Mothman sits still.

Phantomstranger: I said move!

He brandishes the knife. He moves, leaving horrorobsessed sitting their on her own.

Phantomstranger: Blood-type?

Horrorobsessed: Fuck you.

Phantomstranger: Remember, you have 2 wrists!

Horrorobsessed: O positive.

Phantomstranger: Great!

He moves the shirt from her wrist and begins sucking out some blood. The phone rings.

Phantomstranger: I'll get it!

He answers the phone.

Phantomstranger: Hello, this is whore hanger 15. Please hold. This service is being brought to you by phantomstranger.

Cut to Tic in the car. He's talking on the phone.

Tic: Leave them alone.

Phantomstranger: Or what?

Tic: Do you remember? When I was a guard at Saint George Street Station? When I used to go easy on you?

Phantomstranger: Yes...

Tic: Why do you think I did that?

Phantomstranger: Because your weak. Because for one measly year we were friends at school.

Tic: Listen. They don't desreve this. Let them go,

Phantomstranger: Do you remember? When I got out of prison. I met your mum. She was wet. She got wetter when the knife went in. Remember seeing the pictures?

Tic: Shut up.

Phantomstranger: I killed your mum bitch. Why would I suddenly go nice now. And you better check on your daughter. I payed her a visit too!

Cut back to tic. He takes the phone from his ear, looks at it and shouts.

Tic: LEAVE THEM ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!

He looks up and out of a junction, a green car appears. Tic swerves, narrowly missing it. He skids onto some grass then slides down a hill sideways. The car hits a tree stump and starts rolling. It lands in a river. Cut to the house.

Phantomstranger: Sounds like he had a nasty fall.

Mothman: You knew each other?

Phantomstranger: For a while. He was the fat kid. Always brought haggis to school. I stuck up for him a bit.

Mothman: Please...

Phantomstranger: Please what? Please don't hurt you? Please don't kill you? Why not? What will you ever do? Put some lives away. Lock people up for acting out. We're humans with free will to do whatever we want baby! You can't stop us! Infact. I think I'll kill you now, and make slutbag watch! Then she will see how worthless life is!

Phantomstranger falls over. XtRaVa is standing behind him with a bloody knife in his hand.

XtRaVa: Who're you calling slut?

Mothman: Call a doctor. Now!

Scarecrow: I don't think so.

He appears behind XtRaVa. He pushes him onto the sofa.

Scarecrow: Let's all sit tight.

Fade to the scene of the crash. A car has stopped. An old man is looking over the slope. He sees the back corner of a car sink down into the water. Some bubbles emerge. He gasps and runs back to his car.

Old man: Martha! Call the police.

Cut back to the water. Some more bubbles rise. Then Tic appears. He swims to the side and sees the old man.

Tic: Got a cell phone?

Old man: Yeh.

Tic: I need to use it. Mine wasn't water proof.

He gets the phone. Fade to the orphange. A nun knocks on a door.

Nun: Freak. Freak. Dinner is ready. Freak. FREAK! I have the cane.

She opens the door and gasps. Bloodrayne is in there holding freak. She shoots the nun in the head.

Bloodrayne: Stay away from my boy.

Fade back to the house.

Scarecrow: So where's my dear old brother?

Mothman: __V__? I don't know. I never speak to him.

Some blue lights shine through the window. Mothman runs to the window

Mothman: In HERE! IN HERE!!!!

He turns around. Scarecrow is gone. THe door bangs open and Tic walks in.

Mothman: He's gone.

Tic: Don't worry. We'll catch that son of a bitch this time.

ending credits role.

tic
09-28-2007, 01:02 PM
Tics' gonna kick ass :D

ferretchucker
09-28-2007, 01:14 PM
you swam from a vehicle underwater. These scripts writers are getting more and more stupid.

phantomstranger
09-28-2007, 01:59 PM
DAMN! I'm one mean son of a bitch. I deserve the knife in the back.
I hope I come back.
This show is getting better all the time

ferretchucker
09-28-2007, 02:04 PM
Thanks. I dunno. That knife went in deep. You might be dead. But then again, you might not. ;)

Disease
09-28-2007, 02:19 PM
I still haven't recieved my cheque and will not be showing up for shooting untill I do...

ferretchucker
09-29-2007, 02:29 AM
if you really want to be in it. You will.


How much longer do you lt think I should do this for? It's coming up to the one month mark soon.#



EDIT: My mistake, it has been one month!

Disease
09-29-2007, 05:57 AM
if you really want to be in it. You will.


How much longer do you lt think I should do this for? It's coming up to the one month mark soon.#



EDIT: My mistake, it has been one month!

Chuck me in then, I'll be the serial killer property developer that comes along with sinister plans... you write the rest...

tic
09-29-2007, 09:51 AM
you swam from a vehicle underwater. These scripts writers are getting more and more stupid.

Maybe I should change my name to Aquatic :D

phantomstranger
09-29-2007, 01:43 PM
Thanks. I dunno. That knife went in deep. You might be dead. But then again, you might not. ;)

Oh you tease

ferretchucker
09-30-2007, 08:39 AM
There will be a death tonight. But who's?

tic
09-30-2007, 08:46 AM
Well it's not going to be me ................ I can't die :eek:

ferretchucker
09-30-2007, 09:01 AM
Can't you? Kemal did.


:)

massacre man
09-30-2007, 09:06 AM
Can't you? Kemal did.


:)

Racist....

ferretchucker
09-30-2007, 09:09 AM
The word racist is thrown around too much nowadays. (I'm not saying this for a laugh, I'm serious). If you see a place get vandalised and there are a bunch of black teenagers standing around where it happened, looking troubling and you say "It was probably those black people over there". It isn't racist. You're using the fact that their skin is black as a way of identifying them easier, and yet, nowadays, yu would be called racist for that.


























But i know you didn't mean it like that. :)

tic
09-30-2007, 09:20 AM
I checked in the Encyclopedia of Tic, 4th Edt.

Tic definitely cannot die, so there!

ferretchucker
09-30-2007, 09:38 AM
but look at your name. Yours is tic, not Tic. I checked the encylopedia of tic and he can die. Tic cannot.

tic
09-30-2007, 09:42 AM
but look at your name. Yours is tic, not Tic. I checked the encylopedia of tic and he can die. Tic cannot.

My name is "Tic", but my friends call me "tic", more informal that way. :rolleyes:

ferretchucker
09-30-2007, 09:43 AM
well...er...your mum.


































































Is a very nice person.

tic
09-30-2007, 09:45 AM
Of course she is :D

Shes a mystic :p

ferretchucker
09-30-2007, 11:14 AM
Opening credits role. Flash to the inside of XtRaVa's house. Mothman and Tic run out the back door. They climb over the back garden fence to the back alley. It's empty. They split up. Fade to a small, run down barn. It's got a television, a sofa and a bed in it. Rayne carries Freak into it. She lays him on the bed.

Rayne: Hello Freak...do you remember me?

He reaches into his pocket and produces a picture of her, looking slightly younger.

Rayne: Yes. That's me.

Freak: Mum...my?

Rayne wipes a tear from her eyes.

Rayne: Are you sleepy?

He nods.

Rayne: Then, I'll start a fire to keep us warm. You go to beddy byes.

Freak: Tell me a story...

Rayne: Okay then...Once upon a time, in a land, far, far away. There was a princess in love. But her wicked mother and step-father wouldn't allow it. They thought her love was a bad man. So she kept it a secret.

A clip of Dude sitting in his jail cell is faded in with Rayne and Freak.

Rayne: The princess' mum was ill. She was going to die and suffer. So, the princess, who still loved her mother, decided to stop her suffering. She was going to put her in a deep sleep.

A clip of Stubborn lays onto the images, she's lying in her coffin.

Rayne: The princess' love tried to help her, but then an evil warlock discovered the plan and decided to ruin it. He got the princess' love in a dark tower and threw away the key. But the woman had a baby. The most handsome, wonderful baby in the world. It was her loves baby.

A clip of freak in the orphanage lays on the screen.

Rayne: The princess couldn't let anyone know about her baby or the warlock would get rid of her. She sent him away to a place where he would be looked after. Years later. She returned. And she got her baby back. And they lived happily ever after.

She looks down at Freak. He's asleep.

Fade to a small road. Tic is running along it. It's deserted and the sky is getting dark. He looks around. Nothing.

Tic: Scarecrow?

A can of drink rolls along the road. Tic draws his gun.

Tic: Hello?

Somebody taps Tic's shoulder. He spins around but is faced only with Jenna and Vod, who are making "SHHH" motions. They point to a house. The three people walk towards it. Fade to a close-up shot of Rayne. Screaming can be heard in the background. SHe looks up. The camera zooms out to reveal the barn in flames.

Rayne: NOOOOOOO!!!!

She jumps up and covers her face with a cushion from the sofa she was sleeping on. She walks towards Freak. A piece of the roof falls down. It lands on the bed, beside freak. The whole bed goes up in flames.

Rayne: FRRREEEAAAKKK!!!!!

She runs to the bed, forgetting about the fire. She shoves her hands into the blaze and pulls out freak, who's on fire. She runs out of the barn and down to a small stream. She puts freak into the water. The fire goes out but he has horrific burns. Rayne sloches down and breaks into tears. Fade to the inside of the house. The trio are searching around.

Jenna: Anything?

Tic: No. I don't think he's here.

Jenna: Dad?

No response. She says it a bit louder.

Jenna: Dad?

Still no response. She rushes to the bottom of the stairs.

Jenna: Dad!

He appears at the top.

Vod: I don't see him. He might not be here. We should try next door. I have a feeling he would have done something by now. HE has us here. If he wanted to do something, he would have.

Behind him, the loft hatch opens (There arent any stairs to it.) Scarecrow hangs down. He shoves a sharp rod of metal through Vods stomach. Vod looks shocked and falls down the stairs. Jenna scream. Scarecrow goes back up into the loft. Tic shoots at the ceiling. No sucess. Fade to a shot of a hospital. Rayne is holding a bundle. She hurries in, leaves it at the reception whilst the receptionists back is turned and leaves. There's a note. IT is read out in Raynes voice.

This boy was in a fire. I rescued him. He needs urgent treatment. Please look after him carefully. Please. R

Closing credits role



Well, that was a ver actiony one. Rayne's story was one sided but oh well. Tune in on tuesday for the next episode!

tic
09-30-2007, 11:37 AM
Awh........... sniff

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n22/mule4468/emos/352.gif

so sad

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n22/mule4468/emos/nopity.gif



Just read the next bit : Is Vod' dead :eek:

Told you it wasn't going to be me. :D

ferretchucker
09-30-2007, 12:10 PM
you never know, I can make things happen...

Freak
09-30-2007, 03:29 PM
Good work ferret.Really enjoying this so far.

ferretchucker
10-01-2007, 08:02 AM
thanks. Hehe, you're the baby.


Btw, what is your sig of?

jenna26
10-01-2007, 09:51 AM
Well, that was sad.....:( Good job, Ferret. I am also enjoying this. Can't wait for the next episode.

GorePhobia
10-01-2007, 11:19 AM
was i used in an episode yet?

Freak
10-01-2007, 11:37 AM
thanks. Hehe, you're the baby.


Btw, what is your sig of?

To be honest I really don't remember it was something I found a few years ago.

ferretchucker
10-01-2007, 01:09 PM
no fore, you weren't used yet. I have a plan.

ferretchucker
10-02-2007, 11:26 AM
Opening credits role. The grid with the fugitives faces has only three left. Murderdoll, Rayne and scarecrow. Cut to a shot of the train station. Ferret and Massacreman are sitting in the small subway there.

Ferret: Italian BMT for president!

Massacreman: When was the last time you had one of these?

Ferret: Three years ago when I visited mum and Dad in England. I vowed not to have one again. I'm gonna have to kill myself now.

Massacreman: Do you have any life?

Ferret: On Habbo

Massacreman: You sad old man.

Ferret: You rebelious young whipperschnapper!

A train pulls up.

Massacreman: That's it. The 147.

Ferret: Thanks for this by the way. Driving get's hard without legs.

Massacreman: Don't mention it.

Ferret: But there's one more thing. One...thing I forgot to mention.

Massacreman: They're serial killers!

Ferret: No. That would be better. Don't look into they're eyes. They have...the devils eyes.

Massacreman: Shut it Loomis.

Ferret: But seriously. They're a handful.

Massacreman: They're 23.

Ferret: I know. Ever heard the name stiffler?

Massacreman: Shit...

The two walk outside the subway. They look around and ferret points. Two men see them and run over. They each have a bag with them.

Man 1: Hey. How the fuck you been ferret you old man whore.

Ferret: Uncle ferret to you two. And if you live with me, I demand some respect.

Man 2: I never knew you had no legs.

Man 1: Raynie did it.

Massacreman: Shall we get going then?

Man 1: Fuck you. This is family time.

Ferret: Disease! This is massacreman. He's our driver.

Disease: Hear that gore. Ferret finally made the big time.

Ferret: The legless can't drive numbnuts.

Disease: Why weren't you at the funeral.

Ferret: Hmmmm. I wonder. Maybe because you were in canada, and I was here!

Disease: Only mum would die on holiday.

Ferret: Lets go.

Gore: Any hot babes around here?

Massacreman: It's gonna be a long drive.

Fade to the police station. Mothman is at his desk, head in his hands. Jenna is by his side. Silent. A woman comes in.

Woman: Need a drink?

Mothman: No thanks Veer. How about you jenna?

She says nothing.

Mothman: Nevermind.

Veer leaves. Mothman looks at jenna.

Mothman: There was nothing we could do.

Jenna: ....

Mothman: When's the funeral?

Jenna: ...

Mothman: It's been three days now. You have to let your feelings out.

She gets up and leaves.

Fade to the inside of Newbs. Missmacabre, Dante, Ferret, Massacre and the twins are sitting down, drinking.

Gore: Nice place you got here.

Disease: You can almost smell the dank.

Missmacabre: If only you two knew how much this place has been through...

Gore leans over to disease.

Gore: She wants me bad.

XtRaVa: How long are you two here then.

Ferret: At least a month.

Gore: Bathroom?

They all point upstairs. He walks up there and chooses a door. It's the bedroom. Somebody is sitting on the bed. It's Rayne. She's crying over a picture of Freak.

Gore: hey...I'm Gore. Nice room huh?

He winks at her. She winks back with an evil smile. Ending credits role.

ferretchucker
10-02-2007, 01:31 PM
comments please fans!

Disease
10-03-2007, 10:03 AM
So am I you're brother or nephew or what am I in this?

tic
10-03-2007, 10:10 AM
I think you and Ferret are brothers, poor you!

Looks like Gore's appearance will be very short - in more ways than one :D

Disease
10-03-2007, 10:22 AM
I think you and Ferret are brothers, poor you!

Looks like Gore's appearance will be very short - in more ways than one :D

I think Ferret has a secret thing for me...

ferretchucker
10-03-2007, 11:07 AM
you're meant to be my nephew. My sisters Son. You and Gore are twins.

tic
10-03-2007, 11:12 AM
you're meant to be my nephew. My sisters Son. You and Gore are twins.

So he is related to you

Like I said @ Disease "Poor You" and Gore come to think about.

;)

ferretchucker
10-03-2007, 11:13 AM
There's always a replacement police officer if you bite the bullet.

tic
10-03-2007, 11:19 AM
but ...... :eek:

now play fair

ferretchucker
10-03-2007, 11:27 AM
All's fair in soaps and war.

tic
10-03-2007, 11:32 AM
Oh ....... alright then, I admit defeat. :(

*God, you're quick!*

ferretchucker
10-03-2007, 12:19 PM
Life is sweet. Anyway, more comments!

Dante'sInferno
10-03-2007, 12:29 PM
Life is sweet. Anyway, more comments!Can you kill my character in the most gruesome way ever?






plz?kthnx

ferretchucker
10-03-2007, 12:35 PM
Are you sure you want to die? You can never return.

Dante'sInferno
10-03-2007, 12:38 PM
Are you sure you want to die? You can never return.Yeah,i'm sure.But make people sad,then 5 seconds later,forget,alright?





Thank you.

Disease
10-03-2007, 01:14 PM
He wants out!

ferretchucker
10-03-2007, 01:14 PM
there will be no fund for your family.

ferretchucker
10-04-2007, 07:33 AM
Well, I have to admit, I forgot I had to do a segment yesterday, so Here comes the next one. There will be one tommorow.



Opening credits role. Cut to the downstairs of Newbs. A thud is heard.

Ferret: Great. What's he gone and done now. I knew I shouldn't have let him come.

Missmacabre: Should we try to help him?

Ferret: Nah. He'll Be okay on his own.

Cut to the upstairs. Rayne is holding a pair of scissors over Gore. They're struggling.

Gore: What the fuck are you doing?! HELP! HELP!!!

Some noises are heard coming up the stairs. Everyone except ferret and massacreman are up the stairs. The thudding of the wheelchair being pushed up the stairs can be heard. Rayne stops what she was doing and stands there. Gore runs away from her. She makes a "Shhhhh" motion. They all stay quiet.

Ferret: What's happened then?

He reaches the bedroom and pushes past missmacabre. Everyone is still and silent. Ferret's face turns to horror.

Rayne: Hello Daddy.

She smiles maliciously. Fade to Jennas flat. She's on her sofa. Some alchohol bottles are strewn across the floor. She's crying whilst looking at a picture of Vod. She lifts a pot of pills to her mouth. There's a knock on the door.

Mothman: Jenna? Jen? I know you're in there. Look, we need to talk.

Tears run down her face.

Mothman: You haven't said a word since...it happened. Come on. Would Vod have wanted you to be like this?

She puts the pills in her mouth. The banging continues. Fade to the inside of the shop. Hammerfan is counting zero's change out.

Hammer: 1...2...3...4...5...6.

Zero: Thanks.

Hammer: Wait up a second. I'm new here. That bar across the street.

Zero: Yu-...I mean, Newbs?

Hammer: When's it gonna open.

Zero: Erm...Not for a while.

Hammer: Is there any decent booze there?

Zero: Are you asking me out on a date?

Hammer: NO!

Zero: Shame...

Hammer: What?

Zero: What?

Hammer: You're a strange one Zero. I'll have to keep my eye on you.

He begins to walk out and mumbles.

Zero: I'll keep mine on you...

Hammer: What?

Zero: What?

She sighs and he walks away smiling. Cut to Newbs. All the people are downstairs. They're sitting there, nervously.

Gore: That's Raynie...I didn't even recognize her.

Ferret: Trust you to make a move on your step-cousin.

Disease: She is pretty Bangable.

Ferret: God help me...

Rayne: Shut the fuck up!

They're all quiet. She walks around them, holding her knife.

Rayne: Which one of you should I kill first?

Disease: Gore.

Gore: Disease.

Rayne: I missed you two.

They smile proudly. Ferret gives them an angry glare.

Rayne: The annoying Dad who locked up my man?

Ferret moves in his wheelchair nervously.

Rayne: The tart who liked my ex hubby.

Missmacabre Looks around.

Rayne: The cousin who tried to make a move on me.

Gore smiles apologetically.

Rayne: The cousin who once DID make a move on me.

Everyone looks at disease. He looks at the floor.

Rayne: Or you. The guy who just happened to be here.

The door opens.

Voice: Or how about me?

Everybody turns to look at the door. The light of the sun is creating a silhouette around the person.

massacreman: Right on time...

Rayne: Shit...

__V__: Miss me?

Rayne glares, __V__ smiles. Closing credits role.

tic
10-04-2007, 07:41 AM
Am I busy sunbathing or something?

I think it's about time I killed someone.

*apart from myself, which is looking more and more likely*

ferretchucker
10-05-2007, 01:18 PM
Opening credits role. Show the last scene from yesterdays episode. Carry on the scene.

Rayne: Look who decided to show up then.

__V__: Hi Rayne, still a parent killing slut?

Rayne: I hope you remember those words when I'm feeding your intestines to the dogs.

__V__: Really? Hmmmm. I always thought that they prefered liver. Mine did, but then, they were all albino.

Rayne: Shall we get to buisness? I'll shoot you in the leg, we struggle for a little bit, then I come out victorious. Let's go.

__V__: You forgot one thing. I have an Xbox 360 and have 30, 000 hours on Halo 2.

Rayne: So what? You're a geek?

__V__: No.

She points the gun at him and goes to shoot. He shoots first. He shoots the gun from her hand.

__V__: Quick trigger finger.

She looks from her hand, then to __V__. Her mouth is wide open. She goes to run away. He runs towards her, grabs her around the waist and picks her up.

__V__: Ever seen the film Misery?

Rayne: I don't waste my time infront of the screen.

__V__: Well, you'll pick up the storyline.

Ferret gets up. He walks over to the struggling Rayne.

Rayne: What do you want? Go and fuck my mum, like you spent most of your time doing.

He glares at her, then spits in her face. Silence, then...

Rayne: I'LL KILL YOU ALL! I'LL FUCKING BREAK YOUR SPINES! I'LL RIP YOUR TEETH OUT ONE BY ONE!

The noise fades as __V__ carrie her upstairs. There's a thud, then __V__ walks back down.

__V__: That was fun.

He smiles at the rest of the group. They all start laughing in a kind of happy/ scared way. Fade to the outside of Jennas flat. mothman and Tic are standing there.

Mothman: She wont answer. I've tried everything.

Tic: You don't think she's just asleep then?

Mothman: Get real. This is serious. She's got a good lock too. I tried kicking the door down.

tic: Wait there.

e runs down the stairs and out the door. Mothman stands there in silence for a while, then he hears a muffled smash. The door opens. Tic is standing there. A window is broken behind him.

tic: Phone an ambulance. NOW!

Mothman gets out his cell phone and phones them. The camera moves around to show Jenna laying on the sofa, blood pouring from her nose, pills everywhere. Fade to Newbs.

Disease: Remember me?

__V__: How the hell could I forget? You felt up every woman at that bar.

Massacreman: When was this?

Gore: "97. we came over for a visit. Where were you?

Massacreman: Studying in Nepal. Never again.

Disease: Any babes?

Massacreman: NEPAL!!!

They all laugh. A noise is heard from upstairs. __V__ runs up there. He runs back down.

__V__: She's gone.

Ferret: WHAT? HOW?

__V__: She smashed the fucking roof of the closet!

Missmacabre: Phone the police!

__V__: GIVE ME THE PHONE!

Ferret: Isn't she still in the roof then?

__V__: No. She smashed into the attic, then out the top.

Disease: That's hot.

Ferret: GO HOME! NOW!

Gore: Do i have to?

Ferret: JUST GO!

Gore: We haven't got a key.

Ferret: FUCK OFF NOW!

__V__ puts the phone down.

__V__: Where could she be? Think!

Fade to the inside of Dante's flat. The doorbell rings. He answers it. Rayne is standing there.

Rayne: Hey Pookie? Miss me?

Closing credits role.

Freak
10-05-2007, 02:46 PM
So did I die or just get badly burnt?

ferretchucker
10-06-2007, 02:38 AM
badly burnt. You will be returning.

Freak
10-06-2007, 07:36 AM
Sweet.Good job with this man.There has been some tense moments.And some things I didn't expect.

ferretchucker
10-06-2007, 08:57 AM
I want everybody who reads this to post now. Just so I know who my viewers are.

massacre man
10-06-2007, 10:04 AM
I don't have anything to say. I'll reply with a smile. :)

_____V_____
10-06-2007, 11:18 AM
The screen fades black for a couple seconds...







...









...










SUDDENLY a bolt of white light hits the screen in a huge FLASH!

...cutting out to a scene behind a man weeping on his knees in a cellar somewhere...and one swift streak of steel later, the body stays still for a second, without a head on it, before collapsing down on one side...

Unseen fingers clutch the head...and scratch a huge 5 on its forehead...before pulling the eyes out of it...shrieking with wild laughter...



***HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!***



...and then THROW it at the screen with a SPLAT!...

...which slowly turns black again...




...




...

Dante'sInferno
10-06-2007, 11:49 AM
Hi,i'm a viewer....and a reader.







YEY!

ferretchucker
10-06-2007, 01:13 PM
you still sure you want to die dante?

Dante'sInferno
10-06-2007, 03:24 PM
you still sure you want to die dante?Nah.I changed my mind.I shall live!

ferretchucker
10-07-2007, 12:57 PM
Sorry folks, I've just been on two scuba dives at brighton and I'm completely shattered. I wont be writing another episode today, but there will be one tommorow instead.

missmacabre
10-08-2007, 11:12 AM
I'm a viewer :)

ferretchucker
10-08-2007, 01:02 PM
Opening credits role. Fade to the outside of Newbs. Everybody is removing the boards that were over the doors and windows.

Ferret: You never actaully said, how did you come back?

__V__: Didn't I tell you?

Massacreman: No. Remember, Rayne attacked, all that jazz.

__V__: Well, I was just about to get onto the plane, when I decided that there was no point in running. I left the airport but couldn't find Massacre. I was trying to hitch a ride back here so I could face the judge, when I saw it.

Gore: I think I'll watch Sexcetra ton-

Disease: Shut the fuck up, this is getting good.

__V__: In some trees, was a suitcase. It was filled with money. I picked it up when I saw some guys coming out of the trees. The money was probably theirs so I ran. I got a ride and came back.

Missmacabre: Why did you take so long?

__V__: One of the truckers thought I said Vegas.

They all laugh.

Ferret So how much money was there?

__V__: $950,000. After I've payed the family of that workman, We'll have $250,000 to finish this place up. OURSELVES!

Missmacabre: Let's get Dante and tell him the good news!

They all run off. Ferret slowly wheels behind. Fade to the hospital. Jenna is lying in her bed. Mothman and Tic are beside her.

Mothman: Jenna. Can you hear us?

Tic: It's Moth and Tic.

Jenna: ...

Tic stands up.

Tic: I'm starving, I'm gonna find a vending machine.

Mothman glares at him.

Tic: You'll see why I'm doing this soon...

He walks out.

Mothman: He's just gone to get some...

He puts his hand in his face and begins to sob.

Mothman: Why? Why did you do thi to yourself?

Jenna stirs.

Mothman: I thought I could help you. I thought I was helping you. But...

He starts crying

Mothman: I love you Jenna. I've always loved you. I could never live without you...please...please don't go.

She moves around, then rolls over to face him. Her eyes are opens and she's smiling.

Jenna: Mean it?

Mothman hugs her. Tic walks in.

Tic: Thank god it worked. I couldn't bare those awkward silences at the station a minute longer.

They all laugh. Fade to the outside of Dante's flat. Everybody is knocking on the door.

Ferret: DANTE!

__V__: Dante. It's __V__. I'm back.

No answer. Everybody stands there.

Missmacabre: Something's up...

Gore: You guys are pussies.

They all glare at him.

Gore: Just do this.

He steps back, then kicks the door. He falls backwards and the door stays still.

Ferret: I could have kicked it better than that and I have no legs!

__V__ does the same but it opens. The flat is in a terrible state. Everything it smashed, the walls are stained and the furniture is everywhere. Dante is lying on the floor, motionless. There is a piece of brocken glass in his belly and blood everywhere.

Disease: Oh my god...maybe we should move gore.

Ferret: Shut up!

Missmacabre: I'll go to the police.

She runs towards the station.

Dante: Rayne...

__V__: No...she wont do this again. NOT AGAIN!!!

He runs through the flat and bashes the wall with his fist.

__V__: She could be anywhere by now!

Fade to the hospital. The camera shoots through the hallways, it passes horrorobsessed and goes into a small, one bed room. A small boy is laying there and someone is on the end of his bed. It's freak and Rayne.

Rayne: It's all right...everything will be okay. You'll be better soon. Then we'll go and get daddy and be a big happy family...

Closing credits role.

Disease
10-08-2007, 04:12 PM
Hmmm fuck the police, we can handle this ourselfs...

Dante'sInferno
10-08-2007, 04:23 PM
Hmmm fuck the police, we can handle this ourselfs...Greatest.Reply.Ever.

Freak
10-08-2007, 04:44 PM
Just wait til I heal up.The you'll pay,oh will you pay.

ferretchucker
10-09-2007, 06:56 AM
You lot wait for tonights episode. I have a plan...

ferretchucker
10-09-2007, 12:44 PM
Opening credits role. Fade to Newbs. All the people who were at Dantes are sitting down, drinking.

Disease: Why did Raynie turn evil?

Ferret: I don't need this right now.

Gore: She always seemed so nice to me.

Ferret: It was dude. Dudeguadalupe.

Disease: The guy who killed Aunt Stubborn?

Ferret: Yeh. Didn't your mum tell you guys? She was having an affair with him. They planned her death together.

Tic walks in.

Tic: Can you all come down to the station?

They all get up and leave. Disease whispers something in missmacabres ear and she slaps him. Fade to the station. Everybody sits down.

Tic: So...start from the beginning. What actually happened?

Disease: Do we get food here?

Tic puts his face in his hands. fade to the hospital. Mothman is beside Jennas bed.

Mothman: ...and I'm not listening to all your crap CD's!

Jenna: If we're moving in together, you'll follow my rules. Anyway, I think it's food time. Do you wanna go and get something from the Café?

Mothman: I've already arranged lunch...

A nurse walks in, closely followed by several men in suits. the nurse puts down a plate in front of Jenna. It's a great looking roast. The men start singing quietly. Jenna looks at mothman, confused.

Mothman: Jenna. I love you. I know you love me too. We're going to move in together. I'll put up with your bad music, you'll ut up with my snoring. But I couldn't live like that...unless.

He gets down on one knee and produces a small box. There's a ring inside.

Mothman: Jenna. Will you marry me?

Jenna: Oh my...Mothman...surely you can't be...YES!!!

The nurse cheers, the men start singing the Abba song I do, I do, I do, I do.

The camera zooms down the hallway. Young freak is walking along. He's smiling up at people. He goes up to a room with an old man in it.

Old man: Hello little boy.

He smiles at freak. Freak smiles back.

Old man: What happened to you?

Freak: I was in a fire...

Old man: That's a shame. Are your parents okay?

Freak nods. The old man smiles.

Old man: I've got a disease called Cancer. It's quite bad. I don't have long...

Freak looks at the floor sadly.

Old man: That's great. Say, my grandson came in earlier and gave me these.

He produces some M&M's.

Old man: I don't really like chocolate. Do you wants them?

Freak nods and walks towards the old man. He then pulls a scalpel from his back pocket and slices the old mans neck. The old man shakes, then falls over, out of his bed. Blood is everywhere. Freak smiles and walks out the room and back up the hall, the scalpel concealed in his sleave.

Fade to the police station. A woman walks into the room where the people are being spoken to.

Police Woman: Tic. Murderdoll has been spotted in California!

Tic: Wha-? I'm sorry guys, we'll have to end there. Thanks for your help.

They all get up and leave. Fade back to the hospital. Freak is standing in a hallway, looking through a door. The camera changes to his point of view. He's looking at Jenna. He smiles. Ending credits role.

Freak
10-09-2007, 04:07 PM
All I can say is sweet ass.

Disease
10-09-2007, 04:17 PM
Hey Gore, we seem like tweedle dee and tweedle dum...

What the Fuck!

jenna26
10-09-2007, 04:52 PM
They all get up and leave. Fade back to the hospital. Freak is standing in a hallway, looking through a door. The camera changes to his point of view. He's looking at Jenna. He smiles. Ending credits role.



Just when things were starting to go so well for me.....*sighs* ;)

ferretchucker
10-10-2007, 06:42 AM
Tweedle dum and tweedle dummer. Anyway, you two are some of the most fun characters to write. You will each get your own serious stories but for now, it stays as it is.



And sorry Jenna, freak has his eyes on you. But you may come out alive! For me, freak is a kind of Gage/ Damien charcter. He'll have a big story soon. Anyway, to help things move along a bit, I was thinking of doing a time skip. A kind of 1 year later thing, after finishing off all the current storylines. Apart from one. I'll leave one open. It will be a kind of "Season 2" thing. Do you guys think that would work?

missmacabre
10-10-2007, 08:21 AM
Your plan sounds good Ferretchucker. :)

Disease
10-10-2007, 09:08 AM
Tweedle dum and tweedle dummer. Anyway, you two are some of the most fun characters to write. You will each get your own serious stories but for now, it stays as it is.



And sorry Jenna, freak has his eyes on you. But you may come out alive! For me, freak is a kind of Gage/ Damien charcter. He'll have a big story soon. Anyway, to help things move along a bit, I was thinking of doing a time skip. A kind of 1 year later thing, after finishing off all the current storylines. Apart from one. I'll leave one open. It will be a kind of "Season 2" thing. Do you guys think that would work?

I think it would be better to do an episode in the past... give some background to a few characters...

or maybe a holosweet episode like they used to do in Voyager...;)

tic
10-10-2007, 09:11 AM
I think it would be better to do an episode in the past... give some background to a few characters...

I actually thinks thats a pretty good idea.

*Sorry for sounding surprised*

Disease
10-10-2007, 09:12 AM
I actually thinks thats a pretty good idea.

*Sorry for sounding surprised*


"SLAP" ;)

ferretchucker
10-10-2007, 10:30 AM
I did one a while back showing mine and stubborns wedding when rayne and dude killed her. But if you want, here it goes.


Opening credits role. A subtitle "Scarecrow and __V__" appears. Fade to a small house. It's winter and the lights are on. There is snow outside. The camera goes inside a house. A teenage boy is sitting down, watching tele.

__V__: Mum. When's dad getting back?

LilMissScareAll: Soon...soon.

__V__: I want him too see this bit.

LMSA: I don't think he'll be back for this...

__V__'s Gran: Just tell him dear.

LMSA: Be quiet.

__V__: Tell me what?

LMSA: Nothing.

__V__: Tell me what?!

LMSA: Your dad...he wont be coming home...not for a long time.

__V__: He's left us?!

LMSA: Try not to be too upset. It's for the best.

__V__: For the best? FOR THE BEST?! We were struggling with money as it is!

Grandad: It's okay. I'll get a job.

__V__: That's not fair. You're too old for a job. You deserve a rest.

__V__ storms up to his room. Fade to him laying in bed. He's writing an note.

Dear mum, Gran, Grandad.

I love you all. But now that dad's left, I'm a burden. I'm old enough to work. I'm leaving. I'll get a job and find a flat somewhere. Don't wait up for me. I wont come back. You'd only stop me leaving if I did. It's not fair on you all me being here.

__V__

Fade to him putting the note on his pillow and climbing out the window, a small bag on his back. He walks away and looks up at the house, then carries on walking. The screen goes blank, then a scream is heard. LMSA is standing above __V__'s bed, the note in her hand. She starts crying. Flight of Icarus starts playing and there's a short montage of __V__ looking for work, getting a flat, his mum crying and talking to the police, him coming to the house and looking through the window. When it stops, LMSA is standing in a small office.

Adoption Worker: Are you sure you're ready to adopt Miss ScareAll. I read the newspaper when __V__ when missing, and it's only been 6 months.

LMSA: I just need someone to fill the void.

Adoption Worker: We have a young girl. She's 7 years old and-

LMSA: I'd like someone like __V__.

Adoption Worker: Ah. Then maybe you need to meet scarecrow. Scarecrow! Come in here! Somebody wants to meet you!

Fade to __V__, picking up litter in the street. He sees a newspaper. There's a picture of his mum on there and the headline.

Distraught Family make attempt to get back to normal

__V__: What?

Fade to him going towards the house. The door opens and his mum and a boy, who looks similar but slightly younger then him, walk out, laughing.

Scarecrow: Hi! We're just about to have a snowball fight! Wanna join in?

__V__ looks at his mum. Her jaw drops. She runs towards him and hugs him.

LMSA: __V__!!!

Scarecrow: You...you're __V__?

Fade to the inside ofthe house. Everyone is sitting down, around __V__

__V__: So, I really wanted to come back, but they wouldn't let me. I had to sneak out.

Scarecrow: Why did you join a cult?

__V__: Free room. Free food.

Scarecrow: Well...I don't want you to think I'm trying to replace you.

__V__: Not at all. And I'll go if you want me to.

Scarecrow: Why would I want you to go? I finally have a big brother.

LMSA gets up and hugs them both. Gran starts crying. Fade to nightime, __V__'s walking home with a red haired girl.

__V__: So...I was thinking. Since it's our third date...do you want to meet my family?

Spal: Sure.

They both walk in. Scarecrow gets up.

Scarecrow: So, where is she. I feel the need to show baby pictures of -

He stands still, mouth open, looking at Spal.

Spal: Scarecrow? Oh my...I have to go.

She runs out the door.

__V__: What was all of that about?

Scarecrow: I've told you about her. She abandonned me!

__V__: That's your sister?!

Scarecrow runs upstairs. Cut to a shot of __V__ and LMSA eating breakfast.

__V__: He just wont listen to me. I expected it for a while, but 2 weeks.

LMSA: Well...he's been through a lot. Can you blame him?

__V__: I guess not.

Cut to scarecrow at school. He's walking along when a kid about two years younger than him accidentally nudges him.

Scarecrow: WHAT THE FUCK?!

Kid: I'm sorry. I didn't see you.

Scarecrow: Can you see this?!

He punches the kid, who falls backwards into a locker. He lays there, looking up at scarecrow. Some tall, muscular guys come over to scarecrow.

Guy: Wow. I guess you arent as wimpy as we thought. Wanna meet us after school?

Scarecrow: Okay.

Guy: Bus stop near Eastwood street.

Scarecrow: See you there.

Fade to scarecrow sitting at a bus stop. The screen fastforwards to night time, nobody turns up. He gets up and walks down the street to a shop. He looks around, the puts a bottle of coke in his jacket, and walks out. Fade to scarecrow, walking down the street, drinking the coke. He sees the guys.

Scarecrow: Hi...

Guy: Ha! You fell for it. Sorry man, we were just messing with ya. See him. Go and beat him up.

He points to a guy walking along, reading a newspaper.

Guy: Then you can hang out with us.

He looks around, then goes up to the guy. He picks up a stick and whacks him round the head with it. He then starts laying into the guy, when __V__ walks around the corner.

__V__: Scarecrow? SCARECROW!!!

He runs up to him and pushes him off the guy, who runs away.

__V__: What the fuck happened to you?! You were fine a few weeks ago!

Scarecrow: FUCK YOU!!!

He runs off. Fade to the inside of the house. __V__ is talking to LMSA.

LMSA: Why would he do that?

__V__: I don't know. Why wont you believe me?

LMSA: He wouldn't.

__V__ walks out of the house and starts hitting a wall. A short montage of Scarecrow and his friends commiting crimes is shown. Cut to a shot of Scarecrow and the guys outside a house, all dressed in white.

Guy: Go on. You came up with the idea. Do it. Show that black son of a bitch what we think of him.

Scarecrow drinks from a bottle, then soaks a cloth in the drink, sticks it in the bottle then light it. He throws it through an open window. Instantly, a fire breaks out. Some screams are heard. Cut to __V__ walking along a path. He hears the noises and starts running to see what's happened. Scarecrow runs past him. __V__ stops him and looks at him, shocked. Scarecrow spits in __V__'s face and runs off, laughing. __V__ runs to a phone box and dials.

__V__: Fire!

The camera fades to a shot of __V__'s house. There are police cars outside.

Vod: So. Your son has disseapeared. Your other son saw him at the scene. I think that's enough.

LMSA: NO! NO! PLEASE! HE WOULDN'T DO THAT! PLEASE!!!

The police walk out. So does __V__. He sits down and starts to cry. The screen goes black, and the number 1994 appears on the screen. An adult __V__ is talking to his mum.

LMSA: He's being transferred. To a place called readers row. Dr. Zero will be helping him.

__V__: Zero? Zero. Where do I know that name?

The screen cuts to the clip of __V__ picking up litter. The screen rewinds, then plays again, from further back. __V__ looks up at a street sign. It says Readers Row. A little boy comes up to __V__.

Boy: Hi. My names Zero.

__V__: Zero? That's an unusual name.

Zero: We checked. I'm the only one in the state.

__V__: Hi then Zero. I'm __V__.

Zero: Wanna play ball?

__V__: I wish I could. But I have work to do.

Zero: I don't really like playing anyway. I wanna be a psychologist when I'm older. I can help people.

The screen fades back to __V__ and LMSA.

LMSA: I know you don't like him. But I love him. Can you do something for me?

__V__: What?

LMSA: Move to Readers Row. Keep an eye on Scarecrow.

__V__ looks away, then back. He nods, slowly.

__V__: Only for you. Not him.

The screen goes blank. The number 2007 comes up. The screen fades to some woods. There's a small bird watching treehouse where somedoy is sitting. The screen shows that they're holding a picture of __V__ and scarecrow smiling. The hands holding it shake, then tear the picture. Closing credits role.

_____V_____
10-10-2007, 10:54 AM
An entire episode dedicated to me and scarecrow...:cool:

...reminds me of that interjection of Tuco and Father Ramirez in The Good, The Bad and The Ugly. Touching.

TouchĂȘ, FC.;)

ferretchucker
10-10-2007, 10:57 AM
glad you liked it.





More comments. MORE! MORE!!!

tic
10-10-2007, 11:06 AM
And what about the others' lives? Are we not human, do we not have emotions, do we not bleed?

e.g in my first episode why does Mothman say "So the famous tic ......"


edit: went through every thread just to make sure the line was right.

ferretchucker
10-10-2007, 11:09 AM
that reminds me, I did have a plan for that. I might bring it in.

ferretchucker
10-12-2007, 07:56 AM
Opening credits role. Fade to the inside of XtRaVa's house. He and Horrorobsessed are eating breakfast.

XtRaVa: H. I'm gonna be gone for a while. Bloody buisness bleeds me dry.

Horrorobsessed: They owe you big time. You work at least 5 hours overtime a week.

XtRaVa: Yeh. This time I'm going to California to pitch a new building.

Horrorobsessed: You should see if they let you build something around here.

XtRaVa: Could do. Anyway, I'm leaving in an hour.

Horrorobsessed: WHAT?!

XtRaVa: I'm leaving in an hour. I've got my suitcase packed. I'll bring you back something nice. I'll be back in a week.

He kisses her on the cheek then goes upstairs. She sits there, open mouthed for a while. The screen fades to __V__ reading the news paper. The headline "It's not Rayneing Them" is visible.

__V__: Look at this.

Disease gets up from the sofa.

Disease: I still cant believe Ferret kicked me out.

__V__: You put hot sauce in his tea.

Disease: So?

__V__: Your mum may have moved to australia to have you and gore, but he was born in England. Do you know how much tea means to him?

Disease: What'd you wanna show me?

__V__: The newspaper got it wrong again. They said Rayne and her brother scarecrow have still evaded capture.

Disease: Scarecrow isn't her brother. Does he even have a sister?

__V__: He did...and a brother.

Disease: How could they make a mistake like that?

__V__: I dunno. But there's something strange about this...

Disease: What do you mean?

__V__: Once, a few years ago, Scarecrow lead somebody into a trap by making the newspaper make a mistake. Not many people know but I did some research.

Disease: Who do you think he's trying to trap?

__V__: I have no idea. But I bet they're not stupid enough to fall for it.

Fade to the flat above the shop. Hammerfan is serving a customer.

Hammerfan: I don't recognise you.

Crabapple: I haven't been here for a while. Bad memories. But now I'm back to help a friend.

The door to the flat upstairs opens and zero walks out naked.

Zero: I am so tired...I don't know what I'm doing.

Crab: Jesus christ. Zero, cover yourself up.

Zero grabs a tiny pack of big reds and puts it over his "area".

Crab: It may be small but...oh nevermind. Good to meet you hammer. Seeya when you realise what you just did Zero. Bye.

He walks out. Fade to ferretchucker's house. He and __V__ are talking.

__V__: She has a grudge against us both, but I think she'd go after you. When you only have two limbs, you're an easy target.

The doorbell rings. __V__ answers it. He slowly walks into the living room, followed by Crab.

Ferret: What? What the hell are you doing here?

Crab: News got to me about Rayne.

Ferret: What do you care?

Crab: Newb saved my life from a hitman she sent. She tried to kill me twice. I was nearly married to her.

Ferret: But you're not sleeping here. My nephew, Gorephobia, has the only extra room.

Crab: WHAT?!

__V__: Different Gorephobia Crab. This one's too young.

Crab: What was his dad called?

Ferret: His dad. He ran when my sister got pregnant. But his name was also gorephobia.

Crab: WHAT!?

See post 193 for details. I bet you lot forgot about that.

Fade to a shot of the hospital. Freak picks is smiling. He's in the hallway. He's looking at Jenna. She looks at him and waves. He smiles and waves back. Fade back to Ferretchucker's house. Disease and Gore are now there.

Gore: What's this about?

Ferret: I...I don't know how to say this. It's about your dad. He...he had some other children.

disease: What? Who?

Crab: My half brother for one. And my cousin. Who happens to be my half brothers half brother.

Gore: Slow down.

Crab: GorePhobia Sr. had a son called Newb.

Disease: I knew who Newb was. He was at Ferrets wedding.

Crab: Well. He had Newb with my mum. Then he left. Then he came back. Needless to say my mum hated him, but her slut sister got pregnant. He left again.

Gore: Who's this other guy. Your cousin.

Ferret: Dude.

Disease: Dudeguadalupe?

Crab: Then...he had you. Newb was your half brother. And so is Dude.

Gore: I don't believe this.

Ferret: It's true. But there's something else.

Crab: I've managed to find out who Gorephobia is. I tracked him down. He'd changed his name.

The screen fades out to show an old man reading a newspaper in an armchair. He puts it down and sees a smiling Rayne at his window. Ending credits role.







Okay, I'll admit it. This was never the plan. I went back to just remember what Crab had told __V__, then I saw the name Gore. I decided, instead of putting it down to coincidence, to link the stories. Good revalation though. Who do you lot want the dad to be? Person with the highest votes is the dad. Can't be an existing character.

ferretchucker
10-13-2007, 03:17 PM
*******bump*******

ferretchucker
10-14-2007, 04:30 AM
I repeat - BUMP!!!

ferretchucker
10-14-2007, 09:34 AM
Livin it HDC is going on "hiatus" for a while. I will carry it on, I'm just not sure when.

Freak
10-14-2007, 10:11 AM
Are you putting it on hold becasue your going to be real busy or because nobody's is leaving comments?

ferretchucker
10-14-2007, 10:26 AM
a bit of both

ferretchucker
10-21-2007, 04:26 AM
Opening credits role, it's been re-done with a new theme tune. Cut to a shot of Newbs. It's open and flooding with people.

__V__ is serving some people.

__V__: I haven't seen you two around here for ages.

Alkytrio: We went backpacking after Crabs wedding disaster.

Americanmaniac: Yeh, Africa is really pretty cool.

__V__: Where's Cheebs?

Alkytrio: He'll be here soon, he's just gone to visit his mum.

Posher wheels ferret up to the bar.

Alkytrio: JESUS CHRIST!!!

Americanmaniac: What the hell happened to you?!

Ferret: Rayne.

Alkytrio: We heard she was the maniac.

Americanmaniac: I'm the maniac.

Ferret: She's still at large, but not around here. Although, she still does damage...

Cut to a shot of Gore on his sofa, he's got a blanket over him.

Disease: It was two months ago. Get over it.

Gore: Get over it? Dad died. He was killed.

Disease: He was never our fucking Dad, and if you call him that again, I will hit you.

Disease walks out. Cut to the police station. Mothman is sitting opposite Dude.

Mothman: We can make things better for you. Just tell us, where is she?

Dude: With your mum.

Tic: Help us out here. she hasn't come to help you. She's forgotten about you.

Dude starts humming Smoke on the Water.

Tic: Take him back to his cell.

Mothman and some others guide him back. VampiricClown pipes up.

VC: I have some useful information!

Dude looks at VC, worried.

VampiricClown: You see, a long time ago, Dude and Rayne did the dir-

Dude: Fuck you clown cunt!

VampiricClown: That wasn't very nice!

Mothman: Tell us what you know, now.

Dude: Tell them and you die.

Mothman: Shut up Dude!

VampiricClown: I have one word. Freak.

Dude goes mad, and breaks free of the guards and begins smashing the bars of the cell wildly. One of the guards draws his guns.

Mothman: STOP!

The guard shakes and brings his gun down. Mothman draws another gun and shoots it at Dude's back. It's a tranquilizer. Dude carries on smashing the cells. Three more darts are fired. He slumps to the floor.

Mothman: Freak?

Cut to a small house. It's full of people, partying. the camera goes up into the attic. Two people are in there.

Freak: Mummy. When's Daddy coming back?

Rayne: Soon. But remember what I said. You can't keep on what you're doing.

Freak: Killing?

Rayne: Yes.

freak: But you and Daddy do it.

Rayne: And look where it's got us. You can't. I love you and will stay with you as long as I can, but I'm scared...

Freak: Of what?

Rayne: What will happen if you don't stop. I love you and would do anything to protect you, but that doesn't mean it's right. Not right for you. You deserve a good life. Now remember what I told you to do?

Freak nods. He goes into a corner, into his sleepin back and piles some boxes infront of him. Cut to another new place. It's a shed. Scarecrow and Someone else are in there.

Scarecrow: Tonight, we rest.

Murderdoll: Tommorow, we get revenge.

They look out through the shed door to the house across the street. Sounds of partying can be heard coming from there. Closing credits role.

GorePhobia
10-21-2007, 04:58 AM
yay! i am in this!!

ferretchucker
10-21-2007, 04:59 AM
you've been in it for a while Mahoney.

GorePhobia
10-21-2007, 05:01 AM
i know but i like seeing myself come up everytime you do one

makes me smile

ferretchucker
10-21-2007, 05:30 AM
cool. I like writing them and was sad when I stopped but they're back. Next episode is on tuesday.

ferretchucker
10-23-2007, 11:23 AM
Opening credits role. Fade into a shot of someone's closed eyes. everything is slightly quiet, but some faint sounds of struggling can be heard. The eye opens, suddenly everything becomes loud.

Rayne: Freak! RUN! RUN!!!

The camera moves to show Rayne struggling with Scarecrow and Murderdoll. They're getting close to Freak, but she keeps on jumping at their legs and stopping them.

Freak: MUM!

Rayne: JUST GO! I CAN HANDLE THIS!!!

Freak looks around. He looks at the hatch, but it's too near to scarecrow. He picks up a hammer and starts at the roof with the sharper end. He makes a small hole, then uses his hands to make it bigger. He begins climbing out then turns around.

Freak: Mum.

Rayne: I love you Freak! Don't ever forget that! NOW RUN!!!

He climbs out. Scarecrow punches Rayne and follows. Freak is working his way down the guttering. Scarecrow looks over the side of the house and smiles. He holds the hammer out over Freaks head, wiggling it around.

Scarecrow: Three...two -

A hand grabs him. There's a struggle. Rayne and Scarecrow are having a fist fight, Freak is hanging off the guttering, paralysed at the sight. Rayne kicks scarecrows leg. He loses his footing and falls, but grabs raynes leg. She manages to hold onto the edge of the hole.

Scarecrow: Hmmmm. I'm holding onto you, you're holding onto the ledge. You get up, I get up. Sounds fair. I let the boy get away and we sort it out between us.

Rayne: You know what. You can shove a cork up your arse.

Scarecrow: What?

everything goes into slow-motion. Whitney Huston I will always love you begins playing. Freak screams. Rayne looks at him and smiles. Her hand lets go of the edge and her and scarecrow fall. Rayne lands on Scarecrow, softening the impact. Everything goes back to full speed and she begins crawling away. Scarecrow picks up the hammer off the floor and hits her in the head with it. She slumps, then so does he. Freak gets down the rest of the guttering and begins crying beside Rayne.

Murderdoll: Wanna play cops and robbers? I'm the cops.

Freak screams. Suddenly, lots of police cars arrive. Murderdoll looks around.The front door of the house opens and a guy is standing there with a phone in one hand and a knife in the other.

Guy: Actually, they are bitch.

All the police get out of their cars. Murderdoll looks around angrily and screams. She looks at the floor. Freak's gone. Mothman appears from one of the cars.

Mothman: Finally.

He smiles. Fade to Newb's. Jenna is sitting at the bar.

Massacreman: I still can't believe you're engaged.

Jenna: It's wonderful. We've got all the plans.

Alkytrio: You leave town for a few months and you miss everything!

The door opens. Cheebs walks in.

__V__: Look what the cat dragged in. Another old face!

Phalanx: Hi you lot. Anything happen whilst I was gone?

Americanmaniac: You have no idea!

__V__: That reminds me. Someone else died...Kemal.

Alky: The policeman?

Americanmaniac: Who's replaced him?

__V__: Someone called Tic. He's pretty go-

Phalanx runs out. Fade to a shot of Gore sitting on a bench. Ferret wheels over.

Ferret: Gore. I know you and Disease fell out. He told me.

Gore: He doesn't give a shit about Dad.

Ferret: And why do you?

Gore: Because he's my dad! Do I need any other reason?

Ferret: YES! I'm a dad myself. But I'm a bad one simply because I'm not there. I doubt she even knows I exist.

Gore: Pinkfloyd never told?

Ferret: I phoned up last month. She said that "our daughter" doesn't need me in her life. I walked out when she was three days old. We hadn't even named her. I doubt I'll ever find out her name. Pink wouldn't tell me.

Gore: What's your point?

Ferret: She was right. I left her. I walked out and haven't done shit. I didn't feed her. I didn't clothe her. I didn't wake up when she was crying. I didn't judge her first boyfriend. And now she's 19. All I did was look after her mother when she was pregnant, and I did a shit job of that. But your dad didn't do that either. When your mum got pregnant, he was gone.

Gore: But he's still me dad.

You've got two half brothers. One's in prison, one's dead. You didn't even know you had them. There's only one person you can really speak to about this. And that's Crab.

Fade to a shot of the police station. Cheebs is running up some steps. He rushes in and sees Tic speaking to a receptionist.

Phalanx: TIC!

Tic: Phalanx?

Phalanx: I don't...I don't belive this.

Tic: Neither do I...

Phalanx: This is...this is great!

Tic: I told you to forget about it all.

Phalanx: You jumped in front of a bullet for me!

Tic: So?

Phalanx: You are the best person for the job! I...I can't believe it. I told mothman about you. Has he mentioned it?

Tic: Briefly. When we first met he said I as "the famous Tic."

suddenly the station is alive with activity. Lots of people are in there. Police, murderdoll and some other guys including the one who phones the police. Murderdoll is taken up to the cells. When the cell dor closes, Dude starts speaking.

Dude: Good to have you back.

MD: Fuck off. And there'll be more. Your slag got me arrested.

Dude: Fuck you. Where is she?

MD: HEr and Scarecrow were taken to hospital. They might be there a while.

Dude: I can wait. Me and her need to have a little chat...

Ending credits role.

Freak
10-23-2007, 12:24 PM
Glad to see you finally brought it back.Nice job.

ferretchucker
10-23-2007, 01:47 PM
Thanks, Like I've said before I love doing them but it's pretty difficult work.

Dude Guadalupe
10-24-2007, 01:47 AM
Damn, I missed alot. Great job as always.





What's a slag?

Phalanx
10-24-2007, 01:57 AM
It's a lugey

Dude Guadalupe
10-24-2007, 02:19 AM
Oh that clears it up



Says the stupid american

tic
10-24-2007, 02:49 AM
I am a hero yah!

Oh oh ...... who's betting I die next :(

Dude Guadalupe
10-24-2007, 03:05 AM
I'll take that bet, maybe I'll even get to make it happen.

tic
10-24-2007, 03:10 AM
I'll take that bet, maybe I'll even get to make it happen.

:eek: :eek: :eek:

Dude Guadalupe
10-24-2007, 03:15 AM
Admit it, it would be cool.





Admit it......go on......do it.

ferretchucker
10-24-2007, 03:25 AM
Slag - someone who sleeps around a lot. Pretty much another word for a tart or slapper.

Dude Guadalupe
10-24-2007, 03:32 AM
Once again, I are be a stoopid americun, so I had no idea what a slapper was. I gets it now, yessir I do.

ferretchucker
10-24-2007, 03:38 AM
You're a very insane american though. Trying to get at VampiricClown like that. Shame on you Dustin.

Dude Guadalupe
10-24-2007, 03:39 AM
Awww, I'm sorry....



wait, no I'm not

ferretchucker
10-24-2007, 03:41 AM
So you know about Freak, Rayne's in hospital and Scarecrow is now officially your enemy (For what he did to Rayne). Also, Freak's still out there. Where will he go next?



By the way, I already have a plan for the end of the show. But that won't be for a while.

Dude Guadalupe
10-24-2007, 03:47 AM
I can't wait for next part, now that they seem to be keeping me at the desk at work I'll have more chances to check it out.


I like what Freak is doing too, very cool

ferretchucker
10-24-2007, 03:54 AM
Poor freak. He doesn't know why he is what he is. Will he listen to his mothers advice or will he follow in his parents footsteps?


By the way, I'll tell you this, a death will happen this week.

Dude Guadalupe
10-24-2007, 03:59 AM
Maybe he'll take out Scarecrow and make his dad proud........maybe

ferretchucker
10-24-2007, 04:01 AM
who told you?! ;)

Dude Guadalupe
10-24-2007, 04:02 AM
Whoo I win

Freak
10-24-2007, 07:40 AM
Maybe he'll take out Scarecrow and make his dad proud........maybe

That would be awesome.

ferretchucker
10-24-2007, 10:12 AM
Opening credits role. Fade to a shot of the outside of Massacreman's flat. The camera fades inside. Missmacabre is cleaning whilst Massacre is making dinner.

Miss: We're gonna have to tell people you know.

Massacre: Why? They'll realise on their own.

Miss: Yeh, but they're our friends.

Massacreman: Okay. Tonight. Newb's doing Karaoke. We'll do it then.

Some sounds of smashing can be heard. Miss runs to the window.

Miss: GET OFF THE FUCKING CAR!

Massacreman runs out the door. Miss does the same, but she throws a cloth down before she does so. After she runs out, the cloth catches alight from the top of the stove. Fade to Newb's.

__V__: Tonight will be great. I've got nibblets and...did I just say nibblets?

The phone rings. __V__ picks it up. His jaw drops and he runs out.

Disease: What was that about?

Posher: I don't know...

Posher gets his coat on and follows. Fade to a shot of the outside of Newbs. __V__ is running into his car, closely followed by Posher. Posher stops when he sees smoke coming out of a window and Massacreman and Miss shouting at some kids.

Posher: Massacre! LOOK UP!!!!

Miss and Massacre do. They rush into the block of flats and up the stairs. They open the door and flames shoot out at them. The faint sounds of a dog barking can be heard.

Massacreman: Jesus Christ! HANNIBAL! HANNIBAL! COME HERE BOY!

Massacre rushes in. Posher follows.

Posher: You have to leave him!

Massacreman: Are you fucking kidding?! He's my DOG!

Posher: You'll both end up dead in a minute!!!

Massacreman: I don't care!

Posher: Fucking come on! He can find his own way out!

The flames are getting thicker. Posher goes to run the the front door but his leg get tangled in the hoover wire. He slips and loses his balance. He falls backwards, out the open window. A hand grips his just as he's falling. It pulls him back up. The person carries him back out the flat and down the stairs. When they're outside the face can be seen.

__V__: Easy there. Posh people don't fall out windows.

Posher: That was the lamest attempt at a corny line I've ever heard!

__V__: I was driving away and I saw the smoke in my mirror.

Posher: You got up there just in time.

__V__: Anyway, now you're okay, I need to go to the hospital. Scarecrow's in his...last moments.

fade to shot of the hospital. Scarecrow's in a bed, his eyes are closed. Horrorobsessed and another nurse look at each other. Horrorobsessed feels his pulse and shakes her head. __V__ rushes into the room.

Horrorobsessed: __V__?

__V__: Where is he?!

Horrorobsessed: You're his brother?

__V__: That's him!

Horrorobsessed: I...I don't know how to say this but...he...just passed away.

__V__: What?

Horrorobsessed: His injuries were too much.

__V__: No...NO!!!

Horrorobsessed: I'm sorry.

__V__ kneels beside the bed and begins crying.

__V__: HE WAS MY BROTHER!!! NO!!!! SCARECROW! I LOVE YOU! WAKE UP!!!

The camera slowly fades to black and the sounds of __V__ crying can still be heard whilst the end credits role.

missmacabre
10-24-2007, 10:41 AM
Great, there I go burning stuff again.

phantomstranger
10-24-2007, 02:47 PM
Great, there I go burning stuff again.

Well at least your still alive. I've been dead for the last few chapters. Oh well, shit happens I guess. This is still fun to read

ferretchucker
10-24-2007, 02:55 PM
Did you die? I forgot.

massacre man
10-24-2007, 02:56 PM
Did you die? I forgot.

Using that TV money on booze I see.

ferretchucker
10-24-2007, 03:02 PM
My mother is a saint!!!


Seriously, how did he die?

phantomstranger
10-24-2007, 08:43 PM
My mother is a saint!!!


Seriously, how did he die?

Knife in the back, very painful

ferretchucker
10-25-2007, 03:46 AM
I remember! You were holding people hostage! Who put the knife in?

The_Return
10-25-2007, 07:42 PM
Ferrett, I just want you to know that you're one opf the main reasons I dont come here anymore

ferretchucker
10-26-2007, 09:05 AM
Woohoo. High five everyone!

ferretchucker
10-26-2007, 02:56 PM
Sorry, there wont be an episode tonight. But I'll put one up the second I wake up tommorow.

ferretchucker
10-30-2007, 10:19 AM
wow. I missed out a lot, but a lot has been happening. Anyway, as much as I love this, I'm going to draw this series to a close. There won't be another episode after this until next february.


The opening credits role. A small caption of "End of series 1" appears under the title. The camera is above a the church where Kemal's funeral was held. The camera zooms in through the roof to show Scarecrow's coffin. Only four people are in the church. Rev. Rod, __V__ and two women presumably his mother and grand mother. __V__ walks up to the coffin.

__V__: You killed, you wanted me dead and wouldn't have hesiated to puta bullet in my head, but you will always be my brother, and I will always love you.

He walks out of the church. Fade into Newbs. Disease is behind the bar.

Ferret: __V__'s a dick.

Massacreman: Why?

Ferret: He gave this little douche a job.

Disease: Fuck you old man, I'm making the money 'round here now!

Posher: Guys. I have something to say. It's pretty important.

Everyone goes quiet.

Posher: A few months ago I was offered a job by Sony...and I took it.

Horrorobsessed: That's great! What are you doing?

Posher: I'm head of advertising.

XtRaVa: You're finally moving up!

Posher: Yeh...but there's something else.

Ferret: What?

Posher: The job's in England.

Everyone looks shocked.

Americanmaniac: You can't leave!

Alky: Yeh! What the fuck! You've been here forever!

Posher: I know but...it was too good to pass up.

Dante: You twat! Fuck you! You make me fucking sick!

Posher: What?

Dante: I hope you die!

Dante walks out.

Ferret: What the bloody hell was that all about?

Posher: We've been friends for 23 years. And I'm 24. I should've told him.

Posher walks out. XtRaVa follows. When they get outside, XtRaVa starts talking.

XtRaVa: Ask if there are any more jobs available. I want to come too.

Fade into the police station. Jenna and Mothman are eating their lunch.

Mothman: So I was thinking March. There are a few free dates then.

Jenna: Sounds good to me.

Tic: That's enough lovebirds. We've got work to do. I just got a call.

Jenna: Saying?

Tic: It's Rayne. She's out of the hospital.

Mothman: What? HOW?

Tic: We don't know. There were two guards outside her room and she was on the third floor.

Mothman: She must've had inside help from the hospital.

Tic: No. The guards were the only ones allowed in the room.

Mothman: Shit.

Tic: All three of us have to go out there now.

The screen goes black. The words "Thirty Minutes Earlier." Appear. Fade into a hospital room. Rayne is laying in her bed. Something hits the window. She gets up and opens it. About twenty feet away in a tree, Freak is sitting there, just about to throw another stone.

Freak: Mummy. Catch this. Maybe you can crawl down the building.

He throws her a small rope, too small to even reach the bottom.

Rayne: Tie your end to the tree. Quick.

He does so, and she ties hers. to the end of her bed. She then climbs up and out the window, and begins going across the rope. Something snaps - a piece of the rope. Raye begins frantically crawling across. She gets there!

Freak: MUMMY!

They hug.

Rayne: Now lets go. Quick!

Fade to the middle of Readers Row. A taxi pulls up. Posher begins walking towards it, with all his bags. Everyone who was inside NEwb's is there. XtRaVa puts some bags in the car too.

Horrorobsessed: I hope you're paying him to lift your bags Posher!

Everybody laughs. XtRaVa turns around and walks up to Horrorobsessed. HE kisses her on the forhead.

XtRaVa: It's been fun.

Horrorobsessed: What on earth are you on about?

XtRaVa: Bye.

Horrorobsessed: What?

XtRaVa and Posher get into the taxi. Horrorobsessed runs up to it as it starts driving. XtRaVa tells the driver to step on it.

Horrorobsessed: What are you doing?! Where are you going?! X! X! COME BACK! STOP THE CAR! COME BACK!!!

The camera slowly zooms out as the taxi drives away and horrorobsessed begins crying. Disease is shown walking awayn from the people now going up to horrorobsessed to comfort her. Fade to the outside of Gore and Disease's flat. Disease opens it. The room is dimly lit.

Disease: Gore? Where are you? Go-

The camera pans out slightly to show Gore sitting in the corner, with a blade to his wrist and tears steaming down his eyes. Disease rushes up to him. Fade to a shot of the police car. It's speeding along.

Tic: She was seen with a little boy!

Mothman: I'll phone Tony.

TIc: Who?

Mothman: He owns the motel.

Mothman phones and after a shot discussion hangs up.

Mothman: He says legally he's not allowed to go into their rooms.

Tic: Screw it, we're nearly there!

The car carries on going and passes a red light. CRASH! A huge truck plows into the side of it. The truck carries on going, squealing all the way until it skids off, taking the car with it into the side of Wal*Mart. Due to the slowish speed of the truc, the car still relatively survives. The camera zooms out to show the truck driver getting out of the truck and pushing to the car.

Truck driver: He...he's dead.

Fade to the outside of a motel room. some men in police uniforms run to the door. They signal three on their fingers then barge into the door. There are too people on the bed. one of the policemen pulls out his gun and goes over. He turns the woman over, who's in the bed. It's a dummy. Fade to a shot of a train station. A woman and a young boy holding hands smile at each other, then both board a train. The camera zooms out and the doors close and the train slowly starts until it travels off into the sunset as the closing credits go up the screen.

phantomstranger
10-30-2007, 08:25 PM
Awesome series. Thanks

Rayne
11-08-2007, 10:59 AM
Wow...Everyone just sorta dispersed and faded away

Awesome though...This was a lot of fun...I really enjoyed it and looked forward to it...It's a shame to see it go away...I shall miss it

I do understand that it has to be quite a bit of work for you, though...And I appreciate the effort :)

Excellent job

ferretchucker
11-08-2007, 12:18 PM
don't worry, it'll be back in february.

massacre man
11-08-2007, 12:47 PM
My one line was definitely the best.

ferretchucker
11-08-2007, 01:02 PM
you had several lines. Which one were you refering to?

massacre man
11-08-2007, 01:12 PM
you had several lines. Which one were you refering to?

The final one.

ferretchucker
11-08-2007, 01:20 PM
lol. Whoops. Maybe you should've got a bit more. Oh well.

ferretchucker
12-21-2007, 10:01 AM
This is just to tie things up between this and the next series which starts in february.



Opening credits role. The crash scene from the last episode plays. It caries on from after the truck driver's line. Inside, the blood covered body of Mothman is seen. Tic managed to get up, wipes his head and looks over at the body.

Tic: No...NO!!!!

Suddenly, in the back of the car, Kemal appears and looks over at the body. Blood is pouring from his head. The screen suddenly jolts to an eye opening. Mothman sits up in bed, he's covered in sweat. Beside him, Jenna gets up.

Jenna: What? Honey are you okay?

Mothman: Yeh...yeh, I just had the dream again.

Jenna: Oh...I thought you were over that.

Mothman: So did I. It's just...it must be my fault.

Jenna: What are you on about, of course it wasn't!

Mothman: But what if it was?

Jenna: Oh my god...

Mothman: What?

Jenna: I've just remembered what day it is!

The screen fades into the inside of Newb's. Miss Macabre, Ferret, Dante, Massacre Man and Alky Trio are in there. __V__ and Disease are behind the bar. "Merry Christmas Everybody" by Slade is playing.

Ferretchucker: Merry Christmas!

Dante: If it isn't a good one, you're all fucking dead!

Disease: Screw all the old men, all the wheelchair bound and all the ones who can't hold down a girlfriend.

Ferret starts wheeling his wheelchair round the bar towards Disease.

Ferret: You bloody wanker! I'll shove this bloody wheel chair up your arse!

Disease: Careful, I think this bar's on a slight slope!

__V__: You lot...OI! Shutup and listen!

He turns the radio up.

"That's right, the infamous Rayne of Reader's Row has been spotted back in the country! This is the first time she has been seen since she was in Africa and that young child was with her again."

Ferretchucker: Oh shit! There I was thinking this was gonna be a good christmas!

__V__: Who the hell is that kid anyway?

Before anybody can answer, the door opens. Mothman walks in.

__V__: Hey Mothy, haven't seen you around. How's your back?

Mothman: Better than Tic's.

Dante: What?

Mothman: I'm sorry. Can I have a pint of your strongest.

Massacre Man: Been having those nightmares again?

Mothman: Keep your fucking nose out of it!

Disease: Woah there, I think you need to calm down.

He slams the pint down on the table and walks out.

__V__: Dammit. Hasn't he got over it all yet?

Disease: I don't know but my break has just started.

Disease jumps over the bar and runs out. As he's running through the square he trips on a stick. He gets back up and a click can be heard. He turns his head and a gun is pointing at him.

Disease: What the hell are you doing with that?

The gun fires and the screen goes black the words "Continued in 2008" are shown. Closing credits role.