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Old 09-17-2006, 11:40 AM
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Hi There

Hi there people

I'm Dan. What can I say, im a huge horror fan. Well a huge movie fan full stop. After years of watching, enjoying, talking about and thinking how I’d of done the film, I've started writing my own screen plays with the hope of getting one maybe two made. Im nearing completion of my first screen play which is based loosely on a trip I had to Prague then I’ve just let my sick imagination run wild. I'll post the plot at the end of this message and would love to hear what you guys think good or bad.
Anyway I’ve said enough for now. Read the plot below and let me know what you think.

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Four British backpackers travel Europe on there gap year starting in Amsterdam before moving to Prague before the trip is brutally ended when one night when the guys give the girls the slip to go to a brothel near there digs. For them its going to be the night of their life, little do they know it will be there last night. There girls are left trying to find the guys with no help from the locals and even littler help from the police. When word gets to the evil that resides in the brothel there days become numbered too…..

The evil is something scarier than ghost, goblins and vampires. Its something real, men that stoop to the server depths of depravity to get their kicks. These men use the forbidden temptation of a brothel to lure their victims into the dark dingy cellars below, never to see the light of day again. The lucky ones are killed straight away. The others are tortured, starved or eaten. How ever it ends. All are left praying for the end……
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Old 09-17-2006, 12:04 PM
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reminds me of hostel n i've not seen the film but it seems like its on the same lines as that. might just be me though. but seems cool
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Old 09-17-2006, 12:13 PM
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Yeah i know it seems the same but i was writting it before hostel came out. Imagine how gutted i was. When its written on papper it seems the same but my vision for it on screen is some thing very different. Thanks for the feed back.
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Old 09-17-2006, 12:15 PM
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its ok. are u a film student or something?
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Old 09-17-2006, 12:22 PM
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Na started out as a past time now its starting to take over
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Old 09-17-2006, 12:34 PM
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cool, have u made other films or is this ur 1st?
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Old 09-18-2006, 05:14 AM
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oh i like it alot good luck with that. welcome to the forum lets chat pm me ok
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Old 09-18-2006, 07:06 AM
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I don't know man, it's not origanal, so it's hard to tell from a blurb!

But yeah, welcome..............
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Old 09-20-2006, 06:26 AM
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its hard to come up with an original, its all been done. All we get now is remakes of classic horror films, but i spose modern technology calls for that.
The plot doesn't really give the story justice but i have to keep it brief. Can't show all my cards at one. Thnaks for all your comments so far. Keep them coming.
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Old 09-21-2006, 05:44 PM
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