lets wright our own horror novel

[illdojo]

Originally Posted by Despare

After you "wright" it you'll have to let me reed it.

:D :D :D :D :D

[Rob Bottin]

Originally Posted by Papillon Noir

But the device didn't explode. It wasn't a bomb at all, it was a gatekey that opened a portal to somewhere else. Like a rip in space an intense blue light came from the gate.

Only Bark seemed to know what it was, "Oh, no," he said, his face full of panic.

Tristan watched as a Shadow, similar to the one he had seen earlier came out of the portal and wrapped itself around Bark pulling him through the portal as he screamed.

Before Tristan realized what was happening the Shadows pulled in Lila and Chantal. Tristan looked down and realized that the Shadows had wrapped themselves around him. He tried to step back and looked for anything to grab onto, but it was too late and they yanked him through the portal too, closing behind him in a flash.

All Tristan could see was a blinding blue light as he felt himself being pulled from all directions. A wave of nausea hit him and just as quickly as it had come it was gone. He felt himself hit something hard and awoke to find himself, Bark, Chantal, and Lila all laying on a mirrored floor.

The others sat up all rubbing their heads. "Where are we?" Chantal said.

"Great," Lila scoffed, "We're God knows where and now I'm stuck with you all."

"Yeah, well I can change that," Chantal said as she reached for her gun, but it was gone. All their weapons were gone. "What the fuck? Where is my gun?"

Tristan looked around, not only was the floor mirrored, but so was the walls and ceiling. The room was massive with high ceilings. The only part that wasn't mirrored was the twelve ornate doors on along the walls of the room. The room was also empty except for the four of them.

Bark sighed deeply, as all eyes went to him, "I know where we are."

When he turned around he could only see a sharp light making him blind and then it came, from a razorblad it hitted him over the throat and the blood started to spray, Bark fell to the ground, running for the light as he passed away forever...

[Rob Bottin]

Originally Posted by illdojo

:D :D :D :D :D

Lol!

Should we let the thread continue?

[Papillon Noir]

Originally Posted by Rob Bottin

When he turned around he could only see a sharp light making him blind and then it came, from a razorblad it hitted him over the throat and the blood started to spray, Bark fell to the ground, running for the light as he passed away forever...

{I think this post should not be included in this story as the poster has not only not contributed anything previously, but in one run-on sentence, kills off a major character with a weapon, which was previously stated in the prior post: does not exist! There are no weapons here and they are alone, and this does not fit with the previous linear flow of the story.}

[ferretchucker]

Originally Posted by Papillon Noir

{I think this post should not be included in this story as the poster has not only not contributed anything previously, but in one run-on sentence, kills off a major character with a weapon, which was previously stated in the prior post: does not exist! There are no weapons here and they are alone, and this does not fit with the previous linear flow of the story.}

[Agreed.]

Meanwhile, back in the warehouse...

"What the fuck was that?!" Shouted Jack, with a look of horror and shock on his face. He looked up to see Slice and the hairy man who, last time they were in a confrontation had been named Greek both looking suprised and unmistakeably, scared. The only one looking normal looked up. Expressionless. He stared out into the night sky through a hole in the roof of the building.
"It has begun. The war to end it all has begun. Soon, the four races will clash and only one can come out victorious." he said, and Jack gasped as Skimmy slumped the floor and began to laugh.
"Skim, are you okay?" Asked Jack, keeping an eye on the two members of the clan of Lune Sombre, incase they decided to strike.
"I am the only one left." Said Skimmy. "Did you ever wonder why I survived Slices bite? Any normal man would have surely died. I have not been completely honest with you all. First of all, my name is not Skimmy, it's Trius. Trius the third. Trius the great. The last Eldest. And now, the end of all that we know, is upon us.

[ferretchucker]

hmmmm...I just re-read it am I'm afraid it's becoming a sci-fi action rather than horror. Maybe we should go back and change some things.