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Old 11-18-2005, 08:21 PM
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There are plenty of "book-smart" people without any common sense...there are different kinds of intelligence, etc. :)

Follow your dream, HOMIE. WORD. YO YO YO ;) KIDDING ;)

no, nothing like that pop rap that's just saying Homie 20 times over and over, i wrote one inspired by Saw
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Old 11-18-2005, 08:26 PM
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no, nothing like that pop rap that's just saying Homie 20 times over and over, i wrote one inspired by Saw
Cool:) Can you give us some lines?
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Old 11-18-2005, 08:28 PM
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i'm not going to college, the only way i'll be anything is if something happens with the rapping i've been doing, i hope i do get signed so i can quote D12 "Stupid As Shit, Rich As Fuck, And Proud Of It"
Good luck.....I hope it happens for you....:)

(~Psst....don't mind MM she is still stuck in the '80s....:eek: :p )
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Old 11-18-2005, 08:28 PM
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Cool:) Can you give us some lines?
i got the whole thing, if anyone can sit through it

[Intro-Billy from Saw]
Hello Thomas, i want to play a little game, In front of you there will be a man, i want you to wake him up, when he awakens he will have a clue on his body as to how you can unlock the locks on the chains attached to your legs, remember the answer is right below your nose...

[Renegade-Verse 1 (Steps Taken By Thomas)]
you begin to look around and feel the rusty chains wrapped around your ankles
you notice there is a slight glare where the switch to turn on the light dangles
as you pull on it you hesitate and begin to think it could be a trap so you duck down
you see the chains and find out you are in a meat freezer you're outta luck now
the man across from you is laying on his back and next to him is a burlap sack
you can't reach the man so you begin to yell so you yell until your voice cracked
he got up and there was an X on his neck you rewound the tape and double checked
the sedative began to lose effect and you could think clearly you became a nervous wreck
faced with the decision to kill or pass away, you didn't know if this would be your last day
other than the still influenced man you are a complete castaway, try to talk and say hey
he sits up and begins to panic he was the town's mayor, you know you had to be his slayer
he replies "where are we?" he sits up and finds a tape he pushes the button on the player

[Billy speaking]
Hello Mayor Johnson, you've been taking bribes while in office to overlook incidents in which people should have been persecuted, this is one of the men you let off the hook, to leave here you must punish him for what crime he did, i am watching you and once you punish him i will come and let you out of the room

[Renegade-Verse 2 (Steps Taken By Mayor Johnson)]
you toss the tape player at the wall but you miss and hit Thomas right in the jaw
Thomas got up and tried to walk toward you but the chain ran out and he has to fall
you untie the rope on the sack and find a box that said Thomas on the front of it
you begin to think to yourself if the psycho did this demented thing for the fun of it
Thomas wrapped his arms around his legs and layed huddled in the corner of the room
you knew that for one of you that this meant certain doom waiting for the wall to be his tomb
you throw Thomas his box and he looks inside and finds a picture of himself paying you
you begin to feel fed up grab a knife in your box, you decided to punish him for delaying you
you begin to walk toward Thomas with the personalised knife ready to take away his life
he backed to the wall again and screamed "please don't man i have 2 sons and a new wife"
you noticed your chain was long enough to walk over to him and hold the knife to his forehead
but he reached down and grabbed his box and hit you so hard you hit the hard tile floor dead...

[Thomas talking]
are you ok? man get up, oh my god, what have i done, i killed him, ok, ok maybe i can get out of the room now...

[Renegade-Verse 3 (Steps Taken By Thomas)]
you grab onto the mayor's body and grab his knife and cut the back of his neck open
you reach in and feel around but you don't find anything but you still feel around hopin
you can see a bit of ink through his shirt, you see some words tattooed and covered in dirt
you heard a gasping noise and you jumped back so fast you didn't realise he was alive, just hurt
you watched as the mayor felt around the hole you cut into his skin, you see a recycle bin
you pull it over to you and find a cell phone and you are excited when you find some gin
you begin to drink so you can be a bit relieved of what's happening right now, and cover the screams
the mayor still feeling the hole, the alcohol doesn't help you hope it's all just a horrible dream
you put the mayor out of his misery you hit him with the box again, 5 hits later he is history
you begin to think about your story and how today was normal then sadly it got gory
you begin to read the tattoo it said in bloody, dirt covered, green letters "Stand Where It Rains"
you look in the shower, grab a tape and reach for the tape player past the mayor's oozing brains

[Billy Talking]
Hello Again Thomas, i see you saw the mayor's tattoo, i think i did a very nice design on it, there is a door beneath you containing the keys to your chains and to get out of here, i'm sure you must be freezing, you must be as cold as the bodies of the people you killed, you should be thankful you made it out, that is if you can get through the path to your keys...

[Renegade-Verse 4 (Steps Taken By Thomas)]
you open up the door in the floor and see the keys, but they are at the bottom of a pile of broken glass
you reach in and your wrists begin to drip you view the slices on your body you think you will pass
you attempt to grab the keys again but you can't stand the pain, your blood begins to drain
the injuries begin to drive you insane, you're scared that the glass has sliced your vein
you notice a clock on the side and you hear the ticks "3... 2... 1... CLICK!" the door slams shut
you're arm is slammed shut and is ripped off you are suffering much more than a minor cut
you are stuck in that room, it is now your death bed, you hear an intercom and you barely heard what it said
you only heard one little bit and it you couldn't stop thinking about it all that was left was "YOU LOST" ringing in your head...
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Old 11-18-2005, 08:29 PM
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I wasn't suggesting you HAVE to go to college. I just meant that there are better ways to judge one's intelligence than a high school GPA.

There are plenty of "book-smart" people without any common sense...there are different kinds of intelligence, etc. :)

Follow your dream, HOMIE. WORD. YO YO YO ;) KIDDING ;)

In all seriousness, go after what you want. That's very cool.
Very wise words....except for the homie word yo yo stuff;)

She is most correct sir massacre......i know quite a few "book smart" peeps who are very stupid in the way of us commoners.

Actually your "Saw Rap" might be pretty cool.
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Old 11-18-2005, 08:31 PM
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Actually your "Saw Rap" might be pretty cool.
it's up there^
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Old 11-18-2005, 08:33 PM
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Wow.....that is very good.....the boy has a way with words.:)
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Old 11-18-2005, 08:33 PM
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That is fucking awesome! How old are you? Talented;)
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Old 11-18-2005, 08:34 PM
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Very wise words....except for the homie word yo yo stuff;)

She is most correct sir massacre......i know quite a few "book smart" peeps who are very stupid in the way of us commoners.

Actually your "Saw Rap" might be pretty cool.

haha ;) I was only messin' with him.

Yeah, you might be onto something massacure...best of luck to you:)
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Old 11-19-2005, 05:16 AM
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That is fucking awesome! How old are you? Talented;)
i'm 14 and thanks
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