Livin' it HDC (The Horror.Com Soap)

[ferretchucker]

A hospital is shown from the outside. An ambulance pulls up outside it and some paramedics take out a body on a stretcher. The stretche is wheeled in closely followed by Bloodrayne.

Bloodrayne: Can you save him? Please say yu can do something for him!

Paramedic: I'm sorry, you're going to have to wait outside. His body's gone into shock so we have to act fast.

Bloodrayne: I don't care how much it costs, just o something!

Meanwhile, back at Yuki's Bar on Readers Row...

Ferretchucker: I don't know why she went with him. Better left dead.

Posher and Dante nod in agreement.

Ferretchucker: Yuki! Put another one in there.

Newb: I've told you. Yuki was my grandad. I don't even look Japanese. Just call me newb.

Posher: He always get's like this when he's drunk.

Dante: About that stuff I said earlier. You know, about Bloodrayne.

Ferretchucker ignores him, instead, looking at two women approximately 20 years younger than him. He walks over to them and immediately the trio are giggling.

Newb: How does he do that?

Posher: Three words. Crotch Plus Stuffing.

Dante: You do know I was just kidding right?

The scene fades back into the hospital. A young nurse is sitting next to Bloodrayne.

Bloodrayne: Thanks for your support but I think I'll be okay. I...I don't think I can wait here anymore. The environment makes me queezy. I'm gonna go home.

Horrorobsessed: Okay then. Well, I'll make sure you know any news.

Bloodrayne: Wy do stuff like this always happen on Readers Row?

Horrorobsessed: Oh, that's where I'm moving to. Number 12?

Bloodrayne: Ah, so you're XtRaVa's new lodger...good luck.

The scene fades once more into the storage room where just two hours ago the crime was commited. Several policemen are looking around.

Mothman: Well, Sgt Kemal had a look and the CCTV shows nobody has left this building.

Jenna26: What's this?

She points at the footprint left on the floor. It appears the shoe had the letters MD on the bottom. Just as the policewoman is realising who it belongs to, a figure drops from the ceiling wrapping their legs around her neck.

Jenna: HELP!!!!

Mothman: Stay still!

He fires his gun a couple of times. Finally a bullet makes contact. The person falls off Jenna's shoulders and smashes through the window, falling 5 stories and landing in a garbage truck. The laughing, groaning body of Murderdoll slowly travels away into the distance...



Next part up on Sunday. Anything you want to see from it. And don't worry. Zero will be in it.

[Zero]

i damn well better be - or you'll hear from my agent![IMG][/IMG]

[ferretchucker]

come on guys, what do you all think?

[phantomstranger]

So far, so good

[newb]

Originally Posted by ferretchucker

come on guys, what do you all think?

ok....thats more like it......a little newb in any story will help.




thumbs up

[Dude Guadalupe]

The Bloodrayne character isn't believable, she just wouldn't be that mushy.....I know her.




BTW........I wanna be in this.






please

[missmacabre]

Nerd Moment *ahem*


When MurderDoll falls into the truck it reminds me a lot of that episode of Buffy when Buffy is fighting with Faith and Faith gets stabbed and, still living, falls out a window into a truck.

[crabapple]

Robot Monkeys

[bloodrayne]

Haha...This is great...Well, for a soap opera (cuz, ya know...Soap operas suck and all...)...Dustin's right though...Ya kinda made me a little 'soft'...But, I guess that's how Soap operas are supposed to be, huh?

It will be cool to see what happens next :)





OH...Dustin wants to be a part of it...He should be someone demented, sick, twisted, insane, evil and/or deformed...A real freak of some kind...Heh, just trust me on that one ;)



Like, he could be stealing bodies from the hospital morgue and tearing them apart to make streamers, decorations, party favors and appetizers for some kinda party, and really believing that he's doing a good thing for the person who's party it is, and completely not understanding why everyone's so freaked out when they see it, so he just figures that they don't appreciate everything he did for them, and/or it's because they simply don't like him

You know, something like that :)


There's ALWAYS room for a soap opera with a horror theme to it, and there SHOULD be one (then I'd actually watch it :))

Anyone remember Dark Shadows?...It was a bit too tame, but just imagine what we could do TODAY

[ferretchucker]

Opening Credits role, this time with a picture of MurderDoll in the montage thing. Fade to Yuki's Bar. Ferretchucker is laughing and chatting up some girls in the corner. Enter Bloodrayne.

Bloodrayne: I just can't believe it. He could be dead. He could be dead right now.

She slumps to the floor. Ferretchucker runs over to her.

Ferretchucker: Rayne? Rayne? Can you hear me? Can you-

He too slumps to the ground, clutching his chest and twitching wildly. Newb jumps over the bar as Dante screams.

Newb: What's happened? Somebody get a doctor...NOW!

that second horrorobsessed walks in through the door holding a bag.

Horrorobsessed: You forgot your...Oh my...Everybody move. Give them space!

Posher: Old sex bag has finally croaked then. He had a good run...and plenty of rides...

Posher walks over and helps pick up ferretchucker and put him on a chair. BR has got up and appears to be fine.

Ferretchucker: Shoe...does...itch.

Posher: Oh great...nonsense. What the?

He reaches into the old mans pocket and pulls out a medicine bottle.

Posher: "Flirotin - Sex stimulant." Old sicko's been drugging them! I knew it!

Show ambulance lights outside then fade to police station.

Mothman: How did I miss? I could've got her head. I tried. I tried.

Jenna is tending to a wound which she must've sustained in Mothman's attempts to shoot MD.

Jenna: Try not to think about it. At least we know one thing. She did it.

DudeGuadalupe: And why? Ask my girlfriend! Hehehe! Hitman! Hitman! Hitman!

Mothan bangs the cell door.

Mothman: Shut up!

Jenna: Maybe CCTV saw something. maybe it can tell us where she went. Finding her is priority one.

Fade into the hospital where ferretchucker is being rushed into surgery. Newb and Bloodrayne are close behind.

Ferretchucker: Bladder Range ditch's!

Bloodrayne: Crap! i just remembered something! I have to go now!

Without a second glance she runs out the hospital and into her car. Fade to an old barn. Suspenceful music is now playing slightly louder in the background. A few of policemen including Jenna and Mothman are walking into it, holding their guns aloft.

Mothman: We followed the trail here.

[I]One policeman fires his gun. A thud is heared and they rush over to the person. It's murderdoll.

Murderdoll: Fuck you bitches!

Mothman: Why'd you do it?!

Murderdoll: That's what hitmen do!

Jenna and Mothman's faces show shocked expressions. Fade to a shot of Bloodrayne getting out of her car outside the police station. Cut to the hospital. Ferretchucker is just being taken away from Newb.

ferretchuker: Plug pain did it!

Newb: What?

Flash back to the police station where Bloodrayne is walking in. She approaches the desk. Flash back to the hospital.

Ferretchucker: Lug Train did it!

Newb: No...

Flash back to the police station and the woman at the desk looks up.

Woman: How can i help?

Flash back to hospital and ferretchucker's eyes are wide.

Ferretchucker: BloodRayne did it!

Newb: Oh my...

He begins running out of the hospital. Flash back to the police station and Bloodrayne raises a silenced gun. She fires.

Bloodrayne: I'd like to see my boyfriend.

She takes the womans keys and walks through the corridoors, shooting a couple of police officers. She gets to the cell of DG. She opens it and he walks out, smiling. The two have a passionate/firey kiss. Cut back to Newb who is running into the policestation.

Newb: SOMEBODY HELP!

End credits role.

i had a plan for her all along you see. What happens next? Why did Bloodrayne do it? And more importantly, what happens to ferretchucker? Find out on Tuesday!