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It's daytime now and the sun is shining. A caption at the bottom of the screen reads "ScissorCorp Africa Base." A large fenced up area is shown with a plane landing in it. There are several small buildings. Cut to the side of the plane. Bwind, Pr3ssur3 and another man in a suit get out. They walk into one of the buildings.
Inside, it's very sterile with lab tops everywhere. Several people in white coats are walking around. Bwind lays the cage with Zero in on the table. Bwind is smoking. Bwind: Here he is. I did what you asked, now give me the rest of the money Gore. Gore: Wait. You'll recieve your money when you've presented him to me. Why you refused to speak on the pla- Bwind: I didn't want to have to repeat myself! I shot his mother - Pr3ssur3: Excuse me? Bwind gives him a glare. Gore: What has he eaten? Bwind: His mothers liver and possibly more of her organs as well as a mans arm. Gore looks at Bwind. Gore: You're one sick bastard, you know that? Bwind: Your opinion doesn't mean anything to me, your money does. Gore: It's been put into your account. You may leave now. Pr3ssur3: Wait a minute. What about my reward? I've seen and done things I wish I never did. I deserve something. Bwind: You're right. You have seen too much. Lock him up. You can use him as a blood supply. He's O+, I asked. Pr3ssur3: What the hell?! Two large men in black coats grab pr3ssur3 from behind as a man in a white coat injects him with something. He struggles then falls limp. The two men drag him away. Gore: How to you know he'll respond to the food. How do you know he won't die from the drugs?! Bwind: If I knew that, then I haven't fucked my wifes sister. Gore: The plane's waiting for you. Bwind: Let me just say goodbye to Zero. Gore: Who? Bwind: The monkey. He's specimen Zero. Bwind takes the ciggarette out of his mouth and while Zero is looking away from him, he puts it out on the monkey's tail. Zero shrieks in pain and starts shouting at Bwind. Bwind: Goodbye. Don't forget me. He smiles maliciously then walks out of the room.
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(if you need any more characters, i'd like to be involved)
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sounds faireth. I'll pencil you in.
:D
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#34
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Ahahahahaha! Why didn't I sign up for one of these sooner?
Great work FC. Well written and very creative.
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I enjoyed it very much, sir. Good work.
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I'm still enjoying it, FC! Good work!
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Ferretchucker, who is that in your avatar?
It looks a lot like.....Mike Jittlov!
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If you need anymore characters, I'd gladly be one. Good work so far, by the way.
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Thanks for all your support. BTW, it's a picture I found of the hobgoblin in spiderman. It's just a painting though. It's by julie something.
The screen is black. The caption "Three years later" appears on the screen. Fade to the lab. A man in a suit is walking around. He has a small syringe. He walks up to a metal door and puts a code in. The door slides open. Pr3ssur3 is inside, chained to a wall. He looks messy and scrawny. There are scars and bruises all over him and he's crown a beard and long hair.. He looks up at the guy in the suit. Pr3ssur3: You're an idiot! I was there when he was caught! You can't control nature. He must be some kind of monster by now! Fortunato: Don't worry. All I need is 200millilitres. pr3ssur3: You really are stupid aren't you! Let me go. You're not safe! You weren't here when I got betrayed! Make one wrong move and they'll lock you up too! Fortunato slaps Pr3ssur3. Fortunato: Well I won't make a wrong move then! Fortunato puts the syringe in Pr3ssur3's arm and draws out blood. He walks to the door then stops. Fortunato: For your little comments. I don't think you need any dinner tonight. You look down right full up. And there I was, going to let you watch that Die Hard film you love so much. Night Night. Fortunato closes the door, leaving pr3ssur3 in darkness. The camera goes back outside and follows Fortunato. He walks up to a large plastic sheet showing a room. The room has goats legs and other body parts everywhere and is full of trees and hay. There is nothing living in there. Fortunato looks at it for a moment, confused. Fortunato: Were the hell are yo- The plastic shakes madly and the face of a red, hairy monkey can be seen. He's grown bigger and has muscles now. He starts shouting and shrieking violently. Fortunato: Good boy. Love to hate me. Love to hate me. Zero dissapears again. Fortunato presses a few buttons and a small dish slides out of a piece of metal underneath the glass sheet. Fortunato releases the blood into the dish. Somebody walks into the room and Fortunato turns around. They smile at him and he smiles back. The camera shows his fingers partway in the little draw with the dish in it. The other guy leaves the room and Fortunato turns around. He slips on a piece of bloods on the floor and in doing so, presses the close button. Fortunato: AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Zero reappears and in the gap in the draw, manages to reach in from his side and start pulling fortunato's arm in. The gets to the elbow and starts pulling his coat. He pulls it through until he reaches the front pocket and pulls a key card out. Fortunato: NOOOO!!!! Zero smiles and tears a finger off. He runs over to another, much bigger draw which is sealed at the top marked "Live Food". He swipes the keycard along the lid and it swings open. He climbs in and closes it. Somebody else walks in. They see Fortunato and run up to him. Fortunato starts pointing to the place where the live animal draw is. The other scientist looks around, not sure what to do. He presses some buttons and the draw slides open. Fortunato: NOOOOO!!!!!!!! The camera goes into the dark room that Pr3ssur3 is in. His face can be seen from some light coming through a crack in the bottom of the draw. Screams can be heard. Pr3ssur3: Dammit. The door swings open and another scientist runs in. Scientist: He's loose. HE'S LOOSE! Pr3ssur3: Keep your voice down. Let me free and I'll help you. Don't let me free and I'll shout out. I'm beyond valuing life. Are you? The scientist hesitates then runs over to the chains. When he's undone them all, Pr3ssur3 punches him rond the face then kicks him a few times. Pr3ssur3: I had my fingers crossed. Everything outside the room goes quiet. Footsteps can be heard coming towards the room. Pr3ssur3 gets a syringe from the scientists pocket and runs to the corner next to the door. It swings open. Zero walks in. PR3ssur3: Yippee kai yai mother fucker! He stabs the syringe into Zero's neck and runs, closing the door behind him. Pr3ssur3 runs up to roof, loud shrieks can be heard behind him. He runs up to a helicopter just as another man in a black suit is. As the guy jumps in the front, Pr3ssur3 runs to the back door and hides in the back. The helicopter starts flying and the camera pans out. Zero is hanging on the the bottom of it. Sorry this one was long but I had a lot to put in.
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Awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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