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Old 10-26-2007, 09:05 AM
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Woohoo. High five everyone!
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Old 10-26-2007, 02:56 PM
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Sorry, there wont be an episode tonight. But I'll put one up the second I wake up tommorow.
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Old 10-30-2007, 10:19 AM
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wow. I missed out a lot, but a lot has been happening. Anyway, as much as I love this, I'm going to draw this series to a close. There won't be another episode after this until next february.


The opening credits role. A small caption of "End of series 1" appears under the title. The camera is above a the church where Kemal's funeral was held. The camera zooms in through the roof to show Scarecrow's coffin. Only four people are in the church. Rev. Rod, __V__ and two women presumably his mother and grand mother. __V__ walks up to the coffin.

__V__: You killed, you wanted me dead and wouldn't have hesiated to puta bullet in my head, but you will always be my brother, and I will always love you.

He walks out of the church. Fade into Newbs. Disease is behind the bar.

Ferret: __V__'s a dick.

Massacreman: Why?

Ferret: He gave this little douche a job.

Disease: Fuck you old man, I'm making the money 'round here now!

Posher: Guys. I have something to say. It's pretty important.

Everyone goes quiet.

Posher: A few months ago I was offered a job by Sony...and I took it.

Horrorobsessed: That's great! What are you doing?

Posher: I'm head of advertising.

XtRaVa: You're finally moving up!

Posher: Yeh...but there's something else.

Ferret: What?

Posher: The job's in England.

Everyone looks shocked.

Americanmaniac: You can't leave!

Alky: Yeh! What the fuck! You've been here forever!

Posher: I know but...it was too good to pass up.

Dante: You twat! Fuck you! You make me fucking sick!

Posher: What?

Dante: I hope you die!

Dante walks out.

Ferret: What the bloody hell was that all about?

Posher: We've been friends for 23 years. And I'm 24. I should've told him.

Posher walks out. XtRaVa follows. When they get outside, XtRaVa starts talking.

XtRaVa: Ask if there are any more jobs available. I want to come too.

Fade into the police station. Jenna and Mothman are eating their lunch.

Mothman: So I was thinking March. There are a few free dates then.

Jenna: Sounds good to me.

Tic: That's enough lovebirds. We've got work to do. I just got a call.

Jenna: Saying?

Tic: It's Rayne. She's out of the hospital.

Mothman: What? HOW?

Tic: We don't know. There were two guards outside her room and she was on the third floor.

Mothman: She must've had inside help from the hospital.

Tic: No. The guards were the only ones allowed in the room.

Mothman: Shit.

Tic: All three of us have to go out there now.

The screen goes black. The words "Thirty Minutes Earlier." Appear. Fade into a hospital room. Rayne is laying in her bed. Something hits the window. She gets up and opens it. About twenty feet away in a tree, Freak is sitting there, just about to throw another stone.

Freak: Mummy. Catch this. Maybe you can crawl down the building.

He throws her a small rope, too small to even reach the bottom.

Rayne: Tie your end to the tree. Quick.

He does so, and she ties hers. to the end of her bed. She then climbs up and out the window, and begins going across the rope. Something snaps - a piece of the rope. Raye begins frantically crawling across. She gets there!

Freak: MUMMY!

They hug.

Rayne: Now lets go. Quick!

Fade to the middle of Readers Row. A taxi pulls up. Posher begins walking towards it, with all his bags. Everyone who was inside NEwb's is there. XtRaVa puts some bags in the car too.

Horrorobsessed: I hope you're paying him to lift your bags Posher!

Everybody laughs. XtRaVa turns around and walks up to Horrorobsessed. HE kisses her on the forhead.

XtRaVa: It's been fun.

Horrorobsessed: What on earth are you on about?

XtRaVa: Bye.

Horrorobsessed: What?

XtRaVa and Posher get into the taxi. Horrorobsessed runs up to it as it starts driving. XtRaVa tells the driver to step on it.

Horrorobsessed: What are you doing?! Where are you going?! X! X! COME BACK! STOP THE CAR! COME BACK!!!

The camera slowly zooms out as the taxi drives away and horrorobsessed begins crying. Disease is shown walking awayn from the people now going up to horrorobsessed to comfort her. Fade to the outside of Gore and Disease's flat. Disease opens it. The room is dimly lit.

Disease: Gore? Where are you? Go-

The camera pans out slightly to show Gore sitting in the corner, with a blade to his wrist and tears steaming down his eyes. Disease rushes up to him. Fade to a shot of the police car. It's speeding along.

Tic: She was seen with a little boy!

Mothman: I'll phone Tony.

TIc: Who?

Mothman: He owns the motel.

Mothman phones and after a shot discussion hangs up.

Mothman: He says legally he's not allowed to go into their rooms.

Tic: Screw it, we're nearly there!

The car carries on going and passes a red light. CRASH! A huge truck plows into the side of it. The truck carries on going, squealing all the way until it skids off, taking the car with it into the side of Wal*Mart. Due to the slowish speed of the truc, the car still relatively survives. The camera zooms out to show the truck driver getting out of the truck and pushing to the car.

Truck driver: He...he's dead.

Fade to the outside of a motel room. some men in police uniforms run to the door. They signal three on their fingers then barge into the door. There are too people on the bed. one of the policemen pulls out his gun and goes over. He turns the woman over, who's in the bed. It's a dummy. Fade to a shot of a train station. A woman and a young boy holding hands smile at each other, then both board a train. The camera zooms out and the doors close and the train slowly starts until it travels off into the sunset as the closing credits go up the screen.


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Old 10-30-2007, 08:25 PM
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Awesome series. Thanks
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Old 11-08-2007, 10:59 AM
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Wow...Everyone just sorta dispersed and faded away

Awesome though...This was a lot of fun...I really enjoyed it and looked forward to it...It's a shame to see it go away...I shall miss it

I do understand that it has to be quite a bit of work for you, though...And I appreciate the effort :)

Excellent job
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don't worry, it'll be back in february.
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Old 11-08-2007, 12:47 PM
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My one line was definitely the best.
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Old 11-08-2007, 01:02 PM
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you had several lines. Which one were you refering to?
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you had several lines. Which one were you refering to?
The final one.
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Old 11-08-2007, 01:20 PM
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lol. Whoops. Maybe you should've got a bit more. Oh well.
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