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Opening credits role. Fade to the outside of Newbs. Everybody is removing the boards that were over the doors and windows. Ferret: You never actaully said, how did you come back? __V__: Didn't I tell you? Massacreman: No. Remember, Rayne attacked, all that jazz. __V__: Well, I was just about to get onto the plane, when I decided that there was no point in running. I left the airport but couldn't find Massacre. I was trying to hitch a ride back here so I could face the judge, when I saw it. Gore: I think I'll watch Sexcetra ton- Disease: Shut the fuck up, this is getting good. __V__: In some trees, was a suitcase. It was filled with money. I picked it up when I saw some guys coming out of the trees. The money was probably theirs so I ran. I got a ride and came back. Missmacabre: Why did you take so long? __V__: One of the truckers thought I said Vegas. They all laugh. Ferret So how much money was there? __V__: $950,000. After I've payed the family of that workman, We'll have $250,000 to finish this place up. OURSELVES! Missmacabre: Let's get Dante and tell him the good news! They all run off. Ferret slowly wheels behind. Fade to the hospital. Jenna is lying in her bed. Mothman and Tic are beside her. Mothman: Jenna. Can you hear us? Tic: It's Moth and Tic. Jenna: ... Tic stands up. Tic: I'm starving, I'm gonna find a vending machine. Mothman glares at him. Tic: You'll see why I'm doing this soon... He walks out. Mothman: He's just gone to get some... He puts his hand in his face and begins to sob. Mothman: Why? Why did you do thi to yourself? Jenna stirs. Mothman: I thought I could help you. I thought I was helping you. But... He starts crying Mothman: I love you Jenna. I've always loved you. I could never live without you...please...please don't go. She moves around, then rolls over to face him. Her eyes are opens and she's smiling. Jenna: Mean it? Mothman hugs her. Tic walks in. Tic: Thank god it worked. I couldn't bare those awkward silences at the station a minute longer. They all laugh. Fade to the outside of Dante's flat. Everybody is knocking on the door. Ferret: DANTE! __V__: Dante. It's __V__. I'm back. No answer. Everybody stands there. Missmacabre: Something's up... Gore: You guys are pussies. They all glare at him. Gore: Just do this. He steps back, then kicks the door. He falls backwards and the door stays still. Ferret: I could have kicked it better than that and I have no legs! __V__ does the same but it opens. The flat is in a terrible state. Everything it smashed, the walls are stained and the furniture is everywhere. Dante is lying on the floor, motionless. There is a piece of brocken glass in his belly and blood everywhere. Disease: Oh my god...maybe we should move gore. Ferret: Shut up! Missmacabre: I'll go to the police. She runs towards the station. Dante: Rayne... __V__: No...she wont do this again. NOT AGAIN!!! He runs through the flat and bashes the wall with his fist. __V__: She could be anywhere by now! Fade to the hospital. The camera shoots through the hallways, it passes horrorobsessed and goes into a small, one bed room. A small boy is laying there and someone is on the end of his bed. It's freak and Rayne. Rayne: It's all right...everything will be okay. You'll be better soon. Then we'll go and get daddy and be a big happy family... Closing credits role.
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You lot wait for tonights episode. I have a plan...
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10-09-2007, 12:44 PM
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Opening credits role. Fade to Newbs. All the people who were at Dantes are sitting down, drinking. Disease: Why did Raynie turn evil? Ferret: I don't need this right now. Gore: She always seemed so nice to me. Ferret: It was dude. Dudeguadalupe. Disease: The guy who killed Aunt Stubborn? Ferret: Yeh. Didn't your mum tell you guys? She was having an affair with him. They planned her death together. Tic walks in. Tic: Can you all come down to the station? They all get up and leave. Disease whispers something in missmacabres ear and she slaps him. Fade to the station. Everybody sits down. Tic: So...start from the beginning. What actually happened? Disease: Do we get food here? Tic puts his face in his hands. fade to the hospital. Mothman is beside Jennas bed. Mothman: ...and I'm not listening to all your crap CD's! Jenna: If we're moving in together, you'll follow my rules. Anyway, I think it's food time. Do you wanna go and get something from the Café? Mothman: I've already arranged lunch... A nurse walks in, closely followed by several men in suits. the nurse puts down a plate in front of Jenna. It's a great looking roast. The men start singing quietly. Jenna looks at mothman, confused. Mothman: Jenna. I love you. I know you love me too. We're going to move in together. I'll put up with your bad music, you'll ut up with my snoring. But I couldn't live like that...unless. He gets down on one knee and produces a small box. There's a ring inside. Mothman: Jenna. Will you marry me? Jenna: Oh my...Mothman...surely you can't be...YES!!! The nurse cheers, the men start singing the Abba song I do, I do, I do, I do. The camera zooms down the hallway. Young freak is walking along. He's smiling up at people. He goes up to a room with an old man in it. Old man: Hello little boy. He smiles at freak. Freak smiles back. Old man: What happened to you? Freak: I was in a fire... Old man: That's a shame. Are your parents okay? Freak nods. The old man smiles. Old man: I've got a disease called Cancer. It's quite bad. I don't have long... Freak looks at the floor sadly. Old man: That's great. Say, my grandson came in earlier and gave me these. He produces some M&M's. Old man: I don't really like chocolate. Do you wants them? Freak nods and walks towards the old man. He then pulls a scalpel from his back pocket and slices the old mans neck. The old man shakes, then falls over, out of his bed. Blood is everywhere. Freak smiles and walks out the room and back up the hall, the scalpel concealed in his sleave. Fade to the police station. A woman walks into the room where the people are being spoken to. Police Woman: Tic. Murderdoll has been spotted in California! Tic: Wha-? I'm sorry guys, we'll have to end there. Thanks for your help. They all get up and leave. Fade back to the hospital. Freak is standing in a hallway, looking through a door. The camera changes to his point of view. He's looking at Jenna. He smiles. Ending credits role.
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Tweedle dum and tweedle dummer. Anyway, you two are some of the most fun characters to write. You will each get your own serious stories but for now, it stays as it is.
And sorry Jenna, freak has his eyes on you. But you may come out alive! For me, freak is a kind of Gage/ Damien charcter. He'll have a big story soon. Anyway, to help things move along a bit, I was thinking of doing a time skip. A kind of 1 year later thing, after finishing off all the current storylines. Apart from one. I'll leave one open. It will be a kind of "Season 2" thing. Do you guys think that would work?
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