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Old 11-26-2007, 12:54 PM
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I don't have time today but as soon as I get back from school tommorow (Roughly 3:30pm GMT) i'll write the next part.
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Old 11-26-2007, 12:59 PM
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Time to wrap this little puppy up in a bow and send on it's way to Kuwait in case I'm not here tomorrow.

Massacre Man turns and starts to walk away, a car arrives, Disease puts Hammerfan in the back and gets in, the car drives off, a shot from the dashboard, the man driving is focused on the road, Disease has his head back on the seat sleeping, Hammerfan is transforming into a wolf herself.
there ya go!
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Old 11-26-2007, 03:23 PM
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That's fine. Take your time buddy.
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Old 11-27-2007, 03:50 AM
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there ya go!
Thanks, FC!! I have no internet at home right now so I couldn't do anymore searching. Hopefully we'll have it today.
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Old 11-27-2007, 06:53 AM
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Rain is pouring down through the jungle. It's still night time and there's the occasional flash of lightning. Bwind and Pr3ssur3 are both running through the trees. They come to a large circle filled with huts. There is a figure walking around. The figure spots them and runs over shouting. Bwind holds up his hand and starts talking in a strange accent.

Bwind: (In Subtitles) Greetings. We need to hire a guide. I have gold to pay. We need to find a way to the big bridge.

Man: (In ST) I am Kemal. I will take you to the bridge for 10 gold pieces.

Bwind: (In ST) Deal.

Bwind hands Kemal the coins and they set off.

Pr3ssur3: Wont they notice he's gone when we...you know.

Bwind: They'll notice all right. But don't worry, I've already paid the chief. He will explain to the villagers how Kemal saw a leapord and went to get it then never returned.

Pr3ssur3: I don't want to be a part of this. This is just plain sick!

Bwind: You know, I have muscles. I could drag a sack filled with three corpses if I wanted to.

Pr3ssur3: How much will I get paid for this?

Bwind: You'll have to speak to Gore. He's incharge of this project. He'll be in the plane.

Kemal holds his hand up to signal them to stop.

Kemal: (In ST) We are at the bridge. I leave you now.

Kemal goes to walk away. Bwind's arm moves swiftly past kemals neck. Imediately blood starts pouring everywhere and Bwind wipes his knife.

Bwind: Put him in the bag. But cut off his arm. I think our monkey needs a...treat.

The camera stays on pr3ssur3's face as the noisesof him cutting off the arm and putting the body in the bag are heard. He looks as though he's about to be sick. Eventually, he passes the arm to Bwind. Bwind picks up Zero's cage.

Bwind: Eat.

He pushes the hand into the cage. Zero doesn't respond. Bwind starts pushing the arm back and forth, causing it to repeatedly hit Zero in the face. He then pushes it slowly up to zero's mouth. Zero starts chewing.

Bwind: The plane is here. Come on.

The pair begin crossing the bridge. The camera slowly zooms out until it is high above the jungle, but the sounds of Zero chomping can still be heard.
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Old 11-27-2007, 07:44 AM
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Wow, awesome, FC!
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Old 11-27-2007, 07:55 AM
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thanks. I was originally gonna have it so the knife flashed then kemal started running but then this head fell off. But it seemed to unrealistic.
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Old 11-27-2007, 08:02 AM
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thanks. I was originally gonna have it so the knife flashed then kemal started running but then this head fell off. But it seemed to unrealistic.

It's a horror movie - you can do whatever you want, right?! :D
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Old 11-27-2007, 08:23 AM
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great work so far, FC!
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Old 11-27-2007, 08:38 AM
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Thanks. Next part up tonight!
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