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[FairyKorpes]

Originally posted by Iniquity
awfully rude, for someone who is asking for help.

no gore in porn

:p

[Chainsaw Guy]

I think ill go with the lonley boy who tries to kill a girl but gets caught and escapes

[Iniquity]

Originally posted by Chainsaw Guy
I think ill go with the lonley boy who tries to kill a girl but gets caught and escapes

this lonely boys name is Herbert? the girl in question is Matilda. evil lil bitch she is. Herbert is so lonely because Matilda is always playing practical jokes, and usually at his expense. One day Herbert decides he's had enough. Sneaks up behind Matilda and knocks her out, drags her to the basement and decides that the best way to get rid of her is to cut her up Soprano's style. While preparing his scene, Matilda wakes up, startled, wondering what the hell is going on, but notices she is in a basement, and she can see Herbert at a workbench though her eyes are blurry from concusion.

She attempts to flee, but Herbert kicks her feet out from under her, she falls to the floor with a sickening thud. She lets out a scream loud enough to wake the dead. A person walking their dog out in front of the house hears the noise and comes to take a look. Herbert turns off all the lights, and places a foot on the center of her back, keeping her still, but slowly pressing the air from her lungs, keeping her ability to scream again at a minimum.






here ya go, feel free to use it or not... just tryin to help

[Chainsaw Guy]

Originally posted by Iniquity
this lonely boys name is Herbert? the girl in question is Matilda. evil lil bitch she is. Herbert is so lonely because Matilda is always playing practical jokes, and usually at his expense. One day Herbert decides he's had enough. Sneaks up behind Matilda and knocks her out, drags her to the basement and decides that the best way to get rid of her is to cut her up Soprano's style. While preparing his scene, Matilda wakes up, startled, wondering what the hell is going on, but notices she is in a basement, and she can see Herbert at a workbench though her eyes are blurry from concusion.

She attempts to flee, but Herbert kicks her feet out from under her, she falls to the floor with a sickening thud. She lets out a scream loud enough to wake the dead. A person walking their dog out in front of the house hears the noise and comes to take a look. Herbert turns off all the lights, and places a foot on the center of her back, keeping her still, but slowly pressing the air from her lungs, keeping her ability to scream again at a minimum.






here ya go, feel free to use it or not... just tryin to help

Thank you so much

[Iniquity]

Originally posted by Chainsaw Guy
Thank you so much

no problem, but if you use it post the rest of it here.....

[Chainsaw Guy]

Not so violent but the girl in the end gets put into a permanent stupor and Herbet dosent care then gos for her boyfriend
the boyfriend falls out of a 2nd story window and gets put in a coma

[Chainsaw Guy]

Narrator 1:Matilda your average popular girl you know jock boyfriend little preppy friends. Now this is Herbert the kid everyone picks on but the person who picks on him the most Is Matilda (Narrator points at Matilda). She’s always playing practical jokes on him. But now it was Halloween Herbert planned to get Matilda and her girlfriend Scott.
Herbert planned to scare the both of them. It was now Halloween at 4 o’ clock

(The phone rings and Matilda picks it up)
Matilda: Hello?
Todd: Hey
Matilda: oh hi
Todd: we still good for 7 tonight
Matilda: Oh yea sure
Todd: okay bye
Matilda: bye
(Matilda hangs up the phone)
(Herbert waits outside Matilda’s house)
Herbert: Yes this is going to be awesome
Narrator: Matilda walked out of her house at 6:30 Herbert was waiting outside Herbert puts on his hockey mask and gets ready. As Matilda locks the door Herbert creeps up the porch stairs when she turns around she screams (Matilda screams) and she falls down the stairs. When she reaches the bottom she is un-conscious Herbert smiles at his work. (Herbert smiles)
Herbert: Let’s give it up for me
Narrator: Herbert made his way to Todd’s house. Todd was getting ready in his room upstairs. The door was un-locked so Herbert went in; Herbert made his way up the stairs. Herbert came into Todd’s room and Todd turned around and screamed (Todd Screams) and Todd fell out the window. Todd hits the bottom but doesn’t die. Herbert smiled once again (Herbert Smiles) the news headlines tomorrow said “two teens hospitalized Reasons unknown. Herbert was never caught.

[deftones6]

How about Medea only without the killing her own kids part? I mean she'll still be crazy and crave the love of her husband who doesn't really care, but well...shit nevermind that just makes Medea out to be more like Mariah Carey. But Medea was an outstanding play!!!:rolleyes: