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Old 09-30-2007, 11:14 AM
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Opening credits role. Flash to the inside of XtRaVa's house. Mothman and Tic run out the back door. They climb over the back garden fence to the back alley. It's empty. They split up. Fade to a small, run down barn. It's got a television, a sofa and a bed in it. Rayne carries Freak into it. She lays him on the bed.

Rayne: Hello Freak...do you remember me?

He reaches into his pocket and produces a picture of her, looking slightly younger.

Rayne: Yes. That's me.

Freak: Mum...my?

Rayne wipes a tear from her eyes.

Rayne: Are you sleepy?

He nods.

Rayne: Then, I'll start a fire to keep us warm. You go to beddy byes.

Freak: Tell me a story...

Rayne: Okay then...Once upon a time, in a land, far, far away. There was a princess in love. But her wicked mother and step-father wouldn't allow it. They thought her love was a bad man. So she kept it a secret.

A clip of Dude sitting in his jail cell is faded in with Rayne and Freak.

Rayne: The princess' mum was ill. She was going to die and suffer. So, the princess, who still loved her mother, decided to stop her suffering. She was going to put her in a deep sleep.

A clip of Stubborn lays onto the images, she's lying in her coffin.

Rayne: The princess' love tried to help her, but then an evil warlock discovered the plan and decided to ruin it. He got the princess' love in a dark tower and threw away the key. But the woman had a baby. The most handsome, wonderful baby in the world. It was her loves baby.

A clip of freak in the orphanage lays on the screen.

Rayne: The princess couldn't let anyone know about her baby or the warlock would get rid of her. She sent him away to a place where he would be looked after. Years later. She returned. And she got her baby back. And they lived happily ever after.

She looks down at Freak. He's asleep.

Fade to a small road. Tic is running along it. It's deserted and the sky is getting dark. He looks around. Nothing.

Tic: Scarecrow?

A can of drink rolls along the road. Tic draws his gun.

Tic: Hello?

Somebody taps Tic's shoulder. He spins around but is faced only with Jenna and Vod, who are making "SHHH" motions. They point to a house. The three people walk towards it. Fade to a close-up shot of Rayne. Screaming can be heard in the background. SHe looks up. The camera zooms out to reveal the barn in flames.

Rayne: NOOOOOOO!!!!

She jumps up and covers her face with a cushion from the sofa she was sleeping on. She walks towards Freak. A piece of the roof falls down. It lands on the bed, beside freak. The whole bed goes up in flames.

Rayne: FRRREEEAAAKKK!!!!!

She runs to the bed, forgetting about the fire. She shoves her hands into the blaze and pulls out freak, who's on fire. She runs out of the barn and down to a small stream. She puts freak into the water. The fire goes out but he has horrific burns. Rayne sloches down and breaks into tears. Fade to the inside of the house. The trio are searching around.

Jenna: Anything?

Tic: No. I don't think he's here.

Jenna: Dad?

No response. She says it a bit louder.

Jenna: Dad?

Still no response. She rushes to the bottom of the stairs.

Jenna: Dad!

He appears at the top.

Vod: I don't see him. He might not be here. We should try next door. I have a feeling he would have done something by now. HE has us here. If he wanted to do something, he would have.

Behind him, the loft hatch opens (There arent any stairs to it.) Scarecrow hangs down. He shoves a sharp rod of metal through Vods stomach. Vod looks shocked and falls down the stairs. Jenna scream. Scarecrow goes back up into the loft. Tic shoots at the ceiling. No sucess. Fade to a shot of a hospital. Rayne is holding a bundle. She hurries in, leaves it at the reception whilst the receptionists back is turned and leaves. There's a note. IT is read out in Raynes voice.

This boy was in a fire. I rescued him. He needs urgent treatment. Please look after him carefully. Please. R

Closing credits role



Well, that was a ver actiony one. Rayne's story was one sided but oh well. Tune in on tuesday for the next episode!
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Old 09-30-2007, 11:37 AM
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Awh........... sniff



so sad





Just read the next bit : Is Vod' dead :eek:

Told you it wasn't going to be me. :D
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Old 09-30-2007, 12:10 PM
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Old 09-30-2007, 03:29 PM
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Good work ferret.Really enjoying this so far.
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Old 10-01-2007, 08:02 AM
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thanks. Hehe, you're the baby.


Btw, what is your sig of?
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Old 10-01-2007, 09:51 AM
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Well, that was sad.....:( Good job, Ferret. I am also enjoying this. Can't wait for the next episode.
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Old 10-01-2007, 11:19 AM
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was i used in an episode yet?
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thanks. Hehe, you're the baby.


Btw, what is your sig of?
To be honest I really don't remember it was something I found a few years ago.
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Opening credits role. The grid with the fugitives faces has only three left. Murderdoll, Rayne and scarecrow. Cut to a shot of the train station. Ferret and Massacreman are sitting in the small subway there.

Ferret: Italian BMT for president!

Massacreman: When was the last time you had one of these?

Ferret: Three years ago when I visited mum and Dad in England. I vowed not to have one again. I'm gonna have to kill myself now.

Massacreman: Do you have any life?

Ferret: On Habbo

Massacreman: You sad old man.

Ferret: You rebelious young whipperschnapper!

A train pulls up.

Massacreman: That's it. The 147.

Ferret: Thanks for this by the way. Driving get's hard without legs.

Massacreman: Don't mention it.

Ferret: But there's one more thing. One...thing I forgot to mention.

Massacreman: They're serial killers!

Ferret: No. That would be better. Don't look into they're eyes. They have...the devils eyes.

Massacreman: Shut it Loomis.

Ferret: But seriously. They're a handful.

Massacreman: They're 23.

Ferret: I know. Ever heard the name stiffler?

Massacreman: Shit...

The two walk outside the subway. They look around and ferret points. Two men see them and run over. They each have a bag with them.

Man 1: Hey. How the fuck you been ferret you old man whore.

Ferret: Uncle ferret to you two. And if you live with me, I demand some respect.

Man 2: I never knew you had no legs.

Man 1: Raynie did it.

Massacreman: Shall we get going then?

Man 1: Fuck you. This is family time.

Ferret: Disease! This is massacreman. He's our driver.

Disease: Hear that gore. Ferret finally made the big time.

Ferret: The legless can't drive numbnuts.

Disease: Why weren't you at the funeral.

Ferret: Hmmmm. I wonder. Maybe because you were in canada, and I was here!

Disease: Only mum would die on holiday.

Ferret: Lets go.

Gore: Any hot babes around here?

Massacreman: It's gonna be a long drive.

Fade to the police station. Mothman is at his desk, head in his hands. Jenna is by his side. Silent. A woman comes in.

Woman: Need a drink?

Mothman: No thanks Veer. How about you jenna?

She says nothing.

Mothman: Nevermind.

Veer leaves. Mothman looks at jenna.

Mothman: There was nothing we could do.

Jenna: ....

Mothman: When's the funeral?

Jenna: ...

Mothman: It's been three days now. You have to let your feelings out.

She gets up and leaves.

Fade to the inside of Newbs. Missmacabre, Dante, Ferret, Massacre and the twins are sitting down, drinking.

Gore: Nice place you got here.

Disease: You can almost smell the dank.

Missmacabre: If only you two knew how much this place has been through...

Gore leans over to disease.

Gore: She wants me bad.

XtRaVa: How long are you two here then.

Ferret: At least a month.

Gore: Bathroom?

They all point upstairs. He walks up there and chooses a door. It's the bedroom. Somebody is sitting on the bed. It's Rayne. She's crying over a picture of Freak.

Gore: hey...I'm Gore. Nice room huh?

He winks at her. She winks back with an evil smile. Ending credits role.


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