Livin' it HDC (The Horror.Com Soap)

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Originally Posted by ferretchucker

at the moment, there will be no magic in the soap. When ratings hit rock bottom I might bring Newb back.

Traditional hack-and-slash stuff for now, eh?

The guys from CSI are getting shitted upon, though. Poor Kemal...

[Rayne]

Originally Posted by ferretchucker

at the moment, there will be no magic in the soap. When ratings hit rock bottom I might bring Newb back.

Hmm, no magic, huh?........Well then....What if he isn't reeeeaallyy dead?...What if the story was circulated that he was dead, because he's actually in the witness relocation program?....How about THAT, huh? :)

[ferretchucker]

They're doing all that kind of thing in english soaps now too. Dirty Den came back to Eastenders and so id "Cindy".

Anyway, tonights episode.


Opening credits role, the grid of faces appears and another unknown face has a cross on it. Fade to the Newb's. __V__ is talking to Massacreman.

__V__: So I'm putting up the names of everyone who's helping to fund this on that wall. The workers are good...and fast. This place should be done as soon as Sunday.

Massacreman: Good, I'll tell Macabre. See ya later.

He leaves. __V__'s phone rings. He answers and as his face turns from normal to shocked, he runs out of the bar. Fade to the police station.

Jenna: Why isn't she here by now? She was meant to arrive yesterday!

Mothman: There's a party out there searching for her.

Tic: Looks like scarecrow is worse than we thought. If he has done anything, it might help us track him down. He's just got out of prison so hopefully he'll have forgotten about covering his tracks.

Jenna: I don't know. My dad was one of the officers who caught him, he told me a thing or two about last time. Didn't sound too good.

Mothman: I remember. Sitting in this police station...waiting for news of Geddy to come. Worst first week at work imaginable.

Somebody comes in.

Officer: We've found her car. It doesn't look good. Blood, scratches on the leather. There's a car ready for you sir.

Mothman gets up to leave. Jenna stands up.

Jenna: I'm coming too. I need to do something...after my last carelessness.

They both leave. Fade to a Train station. __V__ is standing, looking around anxiously, when someone walks up to him.

Crab: Hi __V__. Sorry, I've been at mums. I've learnt some...things. Come with me.

They walk into a small Café. When they sit down a waitress comes and takes their orders. She walks off and they begin talking.

__V__: You said something about Newb on the phone. What?

Crab: Hold on a minute. You know about what happened in the hospital?

__V__: Of course.

Crab: Well...my mum came to see me. It was about Newb.

__V__: How does she know him?

Crab: Let me speak! A few years before I was born...my mum had some...problems. She was all over the place. In her "Time of need", she met a man. He was called Gore. Gorephobia. Anyway, he helped her out but then...seduced her. She got pregnant.

__V__: You don't mean?

Crab nods.

Crab: But there's more. Gore left her as soon as he found out. Newb has known this all his life. Mum sent him away, she said she was too young to have a child, but after a few years, he came back. My aunt Gret always liked him apparently and she had a falling out with mum. Well...she also got pregnant.

__V__: What des this mean? You have a cousin?

Crab: And Newb had another half brother. A half brother that also knew everything. A half brother who kept his mouth shut about it to everyone else. A half brother that, after reading a letter Newb sent Mum, tortured Newb for 6 months. Literally tortured. Newb also kept quiet. I don't know why, but...

__V__: Who was the half brother?!

Crab: Dude.

The camera cuts to a shot of the police station and Dude is being walked into his cell, smiling. He sits down.

VC: So you're dude. Rayne told me everything about you.

Dude: Like what?

VC: Oh...nothing.

Dude: LIKE WHAT?!

VC: It's not important.

Dude: TELL ME!!!

VC: That like you got her pregnant eleven years ago.

Dude: What?

Fade to a small orphanage where a little boy of about 10 is sitting eating a lolly pop. He has black hair and a slightly rayneish look. A nun walks up to him.

Nun: Freak. It's time to sing our songs. Come on.

The boy gets up and, still frowning, walks over to a circle of children. They all start singing apart from him. He just stands there, eating the lolly. The camera fades pnto the road where the car went off. There are lots of policemen around. A car pulls up and Mothman and Jenna get out of it. They look at the scene, then turn around as a mtorbike pulls up. An old man takes off his helmet.

Jenna: Dad?

Vod: Hi. Need any help?

Just then, a gun fires and hits the ground at Vods foot. All the policemen run into the trees where it came from. The camera shoots to about 150 yards infront of them and under some leaves, a small bomb is seen ticking away. The ending credits role.

[illdojo]

Originally Posted by Psycom5k

I see what you think about me you bastard....... go blow a walrus

Omcdave??? :confused: :D

[VampiricClown]

Since when did I get in jail? Why am I in jail??

[ferretchucker]

Originally Posted by ferretchucker

The screen rewinds until they all leave again, this time, the camera changes to an outside shot. Somebody shouts.

Person: Police! Police get out here! The prisoners are all here! They've got out!

Instantly, lots of police run out of the station, including mothman and Jenna. The fugitives scatter. Mothman chases VC, Jenna chases Bloodrayne. The camera splits into two. One half following each of them. On one side, Mothman chases VC into a house where he picks up a mug and throws it at him. VC dodges it and looks around, smiling. as he does so, he runs straight into a door and falls over. On the other half, Jenna chases Bloodrayne into the small woodland area. She fires her gun a couple of times. Bloodrayne carries on running. They come out the other side and BR runs into a house. Jenna slowly walks in, holding her gun high, looking around. From behind the door, Bloodrayne quickly appears and shoves a knife into Jennas leg.

Bloodrayne: This is just too easy...


Ending credits role, alongside them is a picture of all of the fugitives. A red cross appears on VC's face.

That's when. I thought because you had a big storyline earlier, you couldn't have one now.

[ferretchucker]

lets have some more comments!

[crabapple]

Can you bring the White Ferret into it? It can have a cask of whiskey for people who get trapped in the snow, maybe

[crabapple]

Also, Bloodrayne should really go nuts...she should destroy furniture as well as attacking people.

[ferretchucker]

Rayne will gradually go nuts.