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YOU LIKE ME! yOU REALLY LIKE ME!
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09-12-2007, 09:15 AM
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Thats more like it. I like my character a wee bit more now. He could still have a lover-sacrifice angle or a Newb-resurrector angle too, if thats possible.;)
Re-animate? probable. Resurrect? interesting.:D
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Y'see, here, what ya need is "Red Shirts."
You probably know what those are. "Red Shirts" are the guys on Star Trek who show up at the beginning and get briefly introduced, only to be killed sometime early in the episode. They generally get the Green Weenie shortly after an away team beams down to the planet to investigate. They aren't really characters, they are pseudo-characters who are there to illustrate that the conflict is serious, and they are killed so that major characters don't need to be killed. Quite often on the original Star Trek series, these characters wore red shirts, and after a while fans started noticing that newly-introduced characters in red uniforms were likely to get offed.
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Livin it HDC!!!!!!!!!
Opening credits role. The clips shown have slightly changed, with new footage including crabs shooting and newbs death. Fade to the church. It is filled with crying people and a coffin with Kemal in it is shown. Mothman is making a speech. Mothman: ...and he taught me all I knew. I would never have got this far without him and even after all I did. When I ended up spilling my coffee on his evidence on the Firehose case...when I got him shot in the arm by not covering his back, he still gave his life to save me. He was the bravest police officer I ever met. And he was my closest friend. Thankyou. He walks back to his seat and Rod goes to the front to close the ceremony. When it's over, Mothman walks back to the station. A car pulls up outside and a guy walks out wearing a long brown coat. Stranger: Morning. I'm the new DS, taking over from Detective Seargant Kemal. Judging from the photo I was given of the team, I'm gonna say that you're Mothman? Mothman: Yeh, so the famous Tic is finally here. Ever risked your life to save somebody? Tic: Twice. Mothman: Then I suppose you're good enough for this station. Let me show you around. They both walk in. Mothman introducer Tic to some of the officers. He then takes him on a tour. The camera goes to the cells. Mothman: And this is where we keep our local criminals. Tic: Hmmm, I heard you'd had a lot of crime lately. Bloodrayne: I don't like this one! Kemal was better looking! Send him back! Murderdoll: Can I move cells. She's finally snapped. Just put her in the chair! Whispering Bloodrayne: Shutup or I'll tell them who gave me your brothers number. The two start bickering. Tic: OI! I will not allow this! Now shut up or I'll get somebody to spit in your food! Mothman: We don't threaten our "residents". Kemal thought it was wrong. We've been trusted to keep these people locked up and in bad conditions but we can't give them any less than we're allowed. Tic: Sorry, I come from a slightly stricter area. The tour carries on, they leave and Murderdoll and bloodrayne keep talking. Bloodrayne: He should get here by Friday. Murderdoll: Yeh, and I'm sure he's gonna love you for not killing newb in time. I can see it now. "Sorry honey, i just thought that you could take it." Bloodrayne: Shut up! Your brother said he'll kill anyone. I might just get you taken care of. Watch yourself Biatch. Fade to Yuki's. __V__: We have finally done it! We have $2500! We can get this higher! Every ten dollars you donate gets you another drink from the stash! Ferretchucker: I don't...I...screw it. Posher: I love you guys. I love you all. Lets make love...here and now. Dante: Sobbing one day we'll all be dead! It's my fault. I don't want you guys to die. Lets live forever! Horrorobsessed: Come on you pussies. I've had two more than you and I still feel sober. Posher: Liar! __V__: Come on you guys. As much as I want newbs family to earn, I think you've had enough for today. Ferretchucker: Don't make me kick you! Oh wait! Ha....ha...ha!!!!! Posher: It's...it's funny cause he hasn't got any legs! Dante: I'm sorry you don't have legs Sniff take mine! __V__: it's coca cola for you three. Zero walks in. Horrorobsessed runs up to him. Horrorobsessed: You haven't replied to my texts. Do you forgive me yet? Zero: Just don't speak to me. Horrorobsessed: I just wante- zero: I said shut that big fat hole in your face!!! Everyone stops talking and looks at them. __V__: Don't do this... Zero: What?! Make a scene? Well she made a scene! a great scene for a triple X video! Her hands all over XtRaVa. Horrorobsessed: Please... Zero: Her tounge in his mouth. Probably waiting to get lower! Horrorobsessed: Be quiet. Don't...please... Zero: Ooooo, that's nice. Come on. More zero! Horrorobsessed: Shut! Zero: Give... Horrorobsessed: Your! Zero: It.. Horrorobsessed: Big! Zero: To... Horrorobsessed: Fat! Zero: Me harder! Horrorobsessed: MOUTH!!! She picks up a bottle and hits him with it. It makes a loud noise but doesn't smash. He quickly jumps at her, making a fist. __V__ jumps over the bar and restrains him. __V__: Calm down! Zero: Bloody get off! Don't make me hurt you! __V__: There's been enough killing lately!!! Get out!!! He pushes Zero through the door. Several people begin talking normally. Horrorobsessed slumps to the floor in tears. Horrorobsessed: What have I done? Why? __V__: It's okay. XtRaVa will be back soon. Just then XtRaVa walks in, shouting behind him. XtRaVa: Just go back to your mags! Horrorobsessed runs into his arms. __V__ goes into the backroom and gets a small bottle of spiced rum. __V__: Calm down, it's all okay. Fade to the police station. The tour has just led them into the carpark. Somebody is seen climbing the wall as they go around the corner. They get to the roof and go down the stairs into a small rec room. They find some keys and creep unseen into the cells room. The guard on duty is reading. The person hits them over the head with a spanner. Bloodrayne: Ooooooh...Who's this? VC: I don't believe it. Murderdoll: It can't be. The person holding the keys looks up to reveal themselves. It's scarecrow, smiling sadistically. End credits role. Wow, that one took some thinking out. The Zero Horrorobsessed argument took some planning. What do you all think?
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09-12-2007, 01:28 PM
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Haha the back and forth dialogue between Horrorobsessed and Zero was hilarious.
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@ ferretchucker "You know me too well" :D
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lol, where have you been? I remember you from ages ago and now you're back!
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