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				New online story: Gloom
			 
			
			Incase anyone is interested, i have posted the prelude to a dark fantasy story on my site here: http://www.vodstok.net/gloom/ let me know what you think of the openeing. there is a lot planned for this, and the more feedback i get, the faster it will be done, so let me know what you think . :) 
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			Awww, c'mon. Don't make me beg. If you hate it, I'll refund your money ;)
		 
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			I really liked it. Made me want to read more so I guess it's working so far. It's very very H.G. Wells, which is a good thing!
		 
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			cool, thanks :). It's a work in progress, I'm hoping to add new chapters every couple of weeks. :)
		 
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			Im a dork , i know. Humor me and read it. Please.:) 
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			Very sci-fi-ish. I like it, can't wait to read the other chapters and to see what the graphics look like. Nice imagery and use of words as well.
		 
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			I Like It :D not Perfect  yet ..but your getting there ...Reminds me a bit of HP  LOVECRAFT  - Which is a Very Good Thing ;) !!
		 
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			lovecraft? you flatte rme. He is the only "horror" i ever really read. Thanks :) I actually wenty for his level of description when writing it so you have no idea how good a compliment that is :D
		 
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			:D I can't wait to read the next Chapter .
		 
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