HDC : Corpse in Orbit

[massacre man]

Damn. Already got raped.

[Papillon Noir]

Looking good so far! :)

[roshiq]

Originally Posted by ferretchucker

In the corner is a man, except his fingers end with sharp metal claws, sticking through the skin. He's missing an eye, with a camera lens crudely put in there. Most of his hair is gone, and bits of rusty metal are visible under bits of torn skin

Bit horrifying...but I like this look!:cool:

[Papillon Noir]

Woohoo! I have arrived! :D

[monalisa]

Originally Posted by ferretchucker

Opening credits role. Fade to a shot of the front door of Monalisa's shop, with the large hole. Fade into it.

OK, for the record, the door to my "shop" does not have a large hole. :p Sorry ferret, it had to be said. :D I know, I'm being a perv again.

ANYWAY, another fine chapter to the story. I'm so glad you do this, you're so good at it, and it's so fun to read!

[ferretchucker]

No replies at all? :(

[roshiq]

Carry on, FC!:)

[Papillon Noir]

Originally Posted by roshiq

Carry on, FC!:)

Yeah, it's great! I'm interested to see what happens (especially to my character ;) ) next! :)

[The Flayed One]

Originally Posted by Papillon Noir

Yeah, it's great! I'm interested to see what happens (especially to my character ;) ) next! :)

Very nice. It's you and me baby!;)

[monalisa]

I'm sorry master ferret *bows humbly* I've had the week from hell at work and this is the first time I had time to read this again. Once again, well done. Please continue! :) :) :)