Horror Haikus

[bloody_ribcut]

neighborhood


the crack flows like coke
poured into the noses
hope is a lost soap

[ChronoGrl]

Originally Posted by Posher778

The Closet

Late night, hang my cloak
Stillness instantly broken
Was that breath I felt?



The End

Shot rings through the night
Blood splatters on the carpet
T'was too much to bear


Would love to hear what people thought. I don't write much.

I like The Closet especially, Posh. Nice.

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boiling over
the heat and fury washes
all white turns to red

[Posher778]

Originally Posted by ChronoGrl

I like The Closet especially, Posh. Nice.

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boiling over
the heat and fury washes
all white turns to red

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:P

But thanks anyway

[Zero]

Originally Posted by ChronoGrl

I like The Closet especially, Posh. Nice.

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In boiling over
the heat and fury washes
all white turns to red

a minor edit to fix an otherwise lovely expression of emotion!

nice work CG

[ferretchucker]

Flying through the air,
It knows nothing different,
yes, my chucked ferret.

[ChronoGrl]

Originally Posted by Posher778

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:P

But thanks anyway

HA

right "boiling" does NOT have 3 syllables...

[ferretchucker]

depends how you say it. some say

boy-ling

som say

boy-all-ing

[bloody_ribcut]

i think boil is two and ing makes it three.

[ChronoGrl]

Originally Posted by bloody_ribcut

i think boil is two and ing makes it three.

See? That's what I thought.

But, according to dictionary.com we're wrong (and, yes, I had to look it up):



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Ode to being sick

hot feverish chills
body wracked with hacking cough
forcing out the phlegm

blaaaaaaaaaaargh

[Posher778]

Originally Posted by ChronoGrl

Ode to being sick

hot fev'rish chills
body wracked with hacking cough
forcing out the phlegm

blaaaaaaaaaaargh

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again! Get it together!