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|  the first kill 
			
			im writen a movie it is really long and i haven't finished it so im goin to tell u how the 1st kill goes there is a scienticest or doctor and a lady in a room.micheal myers is on the table (sorta like a morgeu).the man soules michael myer head on.the gurl asks do u want coffie. the man says no. the lady then leaves the man goes to the sienc and washes his hands.as he washes his hands and puts on gloves.myers sites up.when the man turns he gets grabed by the throad.myers chokes him ,and slams his head in to a chout rack on the door.the mans eyes stick out the sockets.myers then grabes a knife ,and sabes it through the mans throad.the knife goes through the throad and door.myers then pushes the mans shoulders down ,and his head come right off. 
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			Brutal. So are you picking up where Resurrection left of sort of?
		 
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				Re: the first kill
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			Good God.
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			im sorry 4 the miss spellin i was typen it fast sorry um im not acturly usen resorection
		 
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			that kill is hot
		 
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			Pretty cool kill, but I predicted Michael sitting up. Been used many times... even in other films. IE. Jason X Anyway, I'd like to actually read the first scene with this kill without any grammar errors. :) 
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			well i'll work on it n show u it with no errors
		 
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				Re: the first kill
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