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04-24-2012, 01:35 PM
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http://olinsain.blogspot.com Olin Sain:mad : Last edited by GhostlyChills; 04-24-2012 at 01:41 PM. 
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Good gad your site has ads, over ads, over widgets, over plugins. It's impossible to read any of the content. Here's a screenshot of one of the pages:
 Why would anyone take the time to navigate trhrough this mess? I'm not here to beat you up, but you desperately need to rethink your strategy. Also, you need a proofreader. Just one example why: In the English language you do not use an apostrophe before an s to denote the plural. That's used to show the possessive. Never mind... after reading a couple pages of your "articles," it's clear English is not your native language. Last edited by neverending; 04-24-2012 at 07:15 PM.
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I don't need your advice!
when it comes to using proper English. You don't need to answer my questions. Get lost!
I took straight A's in Grammer!
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04-25-2012, 09:45 AM
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Quote:
Also, "when it comes to using proper English." is not a complete sentence. You need to delete the period and combine those two sentences into one to have a complete thought.
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04-25-2012, 09:59 AM
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04-25-2012, 10:27 AM
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fuck you!
don't give a third degree for something you know nothing about! I have four books published and you have managed to bitch more than the editor who worked on my four published books! You don't have any published books! You will be laughed at by an editor!
fuck you! :mad  mad::mad:
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04-25-2012, 01:16 PM
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Epic meltdown.
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04-25-2012, 01:57 PM
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Mr. Ghostly- this is a serious offer. I'll copy edit your entire website for $100. That's far cheaper than you'd be able to get it done by anyone else.
Send me a message if you really care about presenting a professional website.
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#10
04-25-2012, 05:45 PM
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I have a few published books, and I can concur that your grammar sucks. Your editor was probably scared to mention any problems to you if your previous meltdown is any indication.
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Author of the Hand of God @TimMiller2011 on Twitter
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