My Movie

[Posher778]

We have most of the script down, but I want you guys opinion. I've been talking to vampiric about it, and he seems to like it, so I figured i'd share. It's a spinoff of scream, go figure. 15 major cast, 12 die, etc. It's a typical slasher, teens go to a party and die, but it's very suspenseful, edge of seat stuff.

It's funny though, like a cross of scary movie and scream, with lines like...


"have you checked the children?"

"I'm not even babysitting!! Is that the best you can do? Screw off asshole!" etc

and a cool scene like

the killer is pulling the backseat assault thing, and the girl gets out of the car and runs to the front door screaming for her friend to answer it, but by the time the friend gets to the door, the killer is standing there with a bloody knife, and the other girl dead on the porch

More on it later, I could use some ideas.

Another comedy line is..
"... and there's blood all over that shattered ketchup bottle!"