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Old 06-22-2015, 04:32 AM
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Originally Posted by The Bloofer Lady View Post
I agree with Repo'd. If I might be bold, what about maybe changing the name if "It" to sort of an eerie nickname made up by the ghost girl. Something that she associates with it. "It" made me keep thinking of a clown. Just a thought.
Yeah, I was kind of feeling that too, not to mention its a pain in the ass to remember to capitalize It every time. Im playing with some ideas for it, will let you know when I come to one.
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