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Since you just dropped by to show off your movie then I will just drop by to review it. Unfortunately your short is pretty bad. Most of this short is a complete waste of time and when you finally start getting to something interesting it seems very forced. Not to mention the ghost girl is a complete joke. I have seen Halloween children with better makeup jobs. This video could have been cut down to 5 min. and still would have been tedious to watch. If you are going to make another short in the future then make sure the things that happen in it aren't 90% filler for an unsubstantial story.
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