Is this based on a creepypasta? Generally when that's the case I have a tough time getting into the story. Creepypastas are fun for a laugh or two but they're all too often underdeveloped and poorly written to carry a game.
What game is this a mod for? I think I missed that part somewhere a long the way.
Looks interesting, like a cross between Slender and Amnesia which isn't all bad. Why are you charging for it though? It's not a bad thing, just curious as most of my favorite mods have been free with the option to donate or to build interest for a stand-a-lone or more complete mod (IE Dayz, Counterstrike, Day of Defeat, Red Orchestra, etc...).
Thanks for showing off your game, stick around the forums and join in on the discussions!
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