good points and questionable points
*I know Laurie doesn't die, but she is in a real bind. I felt the rug yanked out from under me at the end of that last post. The end to the script left me feeling as though I was standing over an abyss. Very suspenseful.
*Some good "deaths".......I think the "wood splinter" death would look awesome in 3D....the eyeball projectile, wasn't that done in Friday the 13th 3 in 3D?
*"horny girl" definitely has to be taken out, maybe in a separate scene where she tries to escape.
*I almost think this could be Michael Myers vs. Cops. There's a lot of cops. Not a bad thing per se since Michael is the main attraction but they are kind of interchangeable.
*More to come. Need to sit down and think about this.
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Last edited by MichaelMyers; 02-26-2013 at 11:14 AM.
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