I'll be nice and atleast post their final confrontation, to the victor go the spoils (LAURIE), but won't post the resolution to the story.
Just as he is getting closer and about to find her,
MICHAEL grabs JAKE's shoulder and tosses him to his back
violently.
JAKE gets back to his feet.
Showing both figures, standing immediately opposite of
each other, glaring into each other’s souls again, the
final fight ensues, to the victor goes the spoils.
LAURIE in fear just looks on, as they are in between her
and the exit into the stairwell.
The two engage in an epic fight, beating each other
mercilessly, this comes to a climax with MICHAEL losing
his KNIFE.
After losing his KNIFE he grabs JAKE holding him in a
bear hug lifting him off the ground, you HEAR the
crushing sounds as if his back is breaking.
JAKE places his left hand behind MICHAEL's head and
drives his KNIFE directly into the center of MICHAEL's
chest, which weakens him, and begins releasing his grip.
JAKE begins softly lowering MICHAEL's body to the ground.
It shows a CLOSE UP of JAKE's HAND, that's on the back
of MICHAEL's head, revealing the large cut from the
previous fight.
After the fight JAKE stands to his feet, and has now
heard LAURIE react to the final stabbing.
JAKE turns to look at her, and LAURIE knows she has been
found, she comes out from the hiding spot.
LAURIE
MICHAEL! Is that you, MICHAEL?
There is a slight pause and then shows a CLOSE UP of
JAKE. Who then ominously shakes his head NO three times,
LEFT, RIGHT, LEFT (slowly).
LAURIE screams and out of nowhere MICHAEL is standing
behind, what the audience will now finally know, is JAKE.
MICHAEL rips the KNIFE painfully from his chest. MICHAEL
reaches up and grabs an ELECTRICAL CORD ripping it from
one end.
MICHAEL quickly wraps it around JAKE's neck, and then
violently, sticks the KNIFE he ripped from his chest,
into the top of JAKES HEAD up to the handle.
MICHAEL tosses JAKE's body off the side of the building,
who hangs by his neck, with the KNIFE, still stuck in
his head, as he bounces off the side of the building,
resting against it.
MICHAEL weakened by his stab wound drops to his knees,
and slowly gets back to his feet staggering.
LAURIE's demeanor changes, she seems concerned for
MICHAEL, like she doesn’t want him to die, she slowly
approaches him.
LAURIE
Michael, I love you! Why can't you
talk to me, and tell me what you
want? Or anyone for that matter?
Instead of killing people to make
your point. People are forgiving,
Michael. And I forgive You!
Just as LAURIE is within close proximity of MICHAEL and
finishes her last line, as if he was playing possum, in
his weakened state on one knee. He lunges for LAURIE
and wraps her in his arms. She struggles to get away,
as MICHAEL just calmly looks into her eyes, as she
struggles.
LAURIE eventually realizes it's useless to struggle, she
can't escape his strength. And just as you see the
acceptance in her eyes, she looks into MICHAEL's eyes.:eek:
Now that's seriously the last you get! I know I said that before, but I REALLY REALLY mean it this time. LOL:D
Be blunt in a PRIVATE MESSAGE about how you feel about the route I went, if you made it this far.
That's where it will stay if you don't want it on here, PUBLIC.