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I feel it was a good attempt, but it's pretty much the Blair Witch project.
Just out of curiosity, was there a script, or was this done by the seat of the pants?
Also, I think if you could've done something with the camera to make the picture look muddled or out of focus like it was actually recovered from a river, it would've been a little better. If they were walking somewhere or trying to get out of the situation, it could've been a little more suspenseful.
Overall, not bad for a 5 minute mini, but it just needed more attention to detail, and the foul language doesn't really add anything.
I'm not trying to sound negative, just posting my observations. I'd say try it again and re-post with some changes. I think you could do very well.
Devil is in the details amigo. :)
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