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Man - What does it take to pull out an A? Or even a B+? I was pretty damn proud of my entry. :mad:
I actually disagree with Judge #1 re transposing the lines - I feel as though "Radiation has taken its toll" would grab the Reader more than "The shrinking I cannot control;" I think that it's something that would make me want to read on - Introducing the "shrinking" first might be silly...
Regardless, thanks again to the judges who are putting their time in review and consideration.
Last edited by ChronoGrl; 09-26-2011 at 05:49 AM.
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