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Copyright is misspelled as copywright. This is not a British spellling, it's just an error.

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which is a story YOU wrote, there is this line"

There is a man sat, rocking back and forth

Unless Brits have a very odd way of communicating, the word "is" is unneccesary.

From the same story:

She looks up and me through big blue eyes

Unless Brits use the words "at" and "and" interchangably, then that too is an error.

From another of YOUR stories:

As I close in on the beast, it's growl gets shrill

In both the U.S. & the U.K. "it's" is a contraction for it is. You mean "its."

You do it again here:

It's whimper becomes a terrified whine.

You also have a tendency to split a sentence into two separate sentences, where the second sentence is not complete. For example:

Gripping it's mouth and neck.
I twist it's head around.

Actually, in that example the first one is incomplete, and you misspell its again.

I'm afraid you desperately DO need a proofreader. Most writers do- it's very hard to proofread your own work- you're too used to it.

Unfortunately, a site dedicated to writing that features so many errors lacks credibility. I wish you luck though.