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Old 06-22-2010, 03:47 PM
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Chelsea!

Your story was badass!!

I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you!

Aside from a few words being used incorrectly due to spell check, I didn't see anything really wrong with it. An example is "food" instead of "foot". :) Nothing a quick double check won't fix.

Best of luck to you and your writing. If you have more books in this series, please post them here so I can read more.

-Chris
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