Chelsea!
Your story was badass!!
I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you!
Aside from a few words being used incorrectly due to spell check, I didn't see anything really wrong with it. An example is "food" instead of "foot". :) Nothing a quick double check won't fix.
Best of luck to you and your writing. If you have more books in this series, please post them here so I can read more.
-Chris
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