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Originally Posted by ChronoGrl
OK. So I actually think that the direction is really good - How shots are framed, the editing, that sort of thing.
The voice over honestly drives me mad - It's heavy-handed and really gets in the way of the movie. Also, I really don't care about any of the characters, so I'm ambivalent as to whether or not they live or die.
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Thanks for watching it.. Yeah, i know the writing is crap.. haha, what happened was I am a comedy writer, I wrote for 4 years straight, then took 4 years off to learn to edit, then the last two I have been shooting and directing so, when i came down to doing this short film. I was concerned about directing and not writing.. I needed to go back to square one and make sure the script was good.. before trying to make a film, but you live and your learn.. I am trying to develop a feature length script based off Barnacle Bill, well, see how that goes, once again, it's not comedy.. Thanks for watching.. I do appreciate it.. and the honest criticism is always nice..