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Old 06-01-2004, 03:21 AM
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Nice job, i like the harmony note there, helped me picture it alot more like a song....it IS a song right?...id like to get some mp3 action on it if it is....pretty nice little love ballad ya got there Mr.psycho....

Alright since its just you and me on this site writing lyrics apparently, ill go with a love ballad to match ya....

One Lost Moment

Verse1
Too broken,
To even try,
Pretend this love,
is a lie.
Transcend the pain we both knew
*wispered* (everytime.....i close my eyes...)

I Still See You
Bridge -- (waltz)
See you dance...
I still see you...
See you dance...

Verse 2
Somehow we,
Got lost at sea.
Desperatly close
to the shore.
Abandonded our ship premature.
*wispered (everytime.....i close my eyes....)

I Still See Your...
Bridge2--(waltz)
Shadow.
Dance across.....this.....wall.
Something so quaint and tivial's
what i miss...most...of all.

Chorus - Heavy guitar
I'll never stop believing in you...
I'll never stop believing in you...
Through all the shit you put me through,
I'll never stop believing in you...

Outro
For a moment there.....i lost myself in you,
For a moment........there was nothing i wouldn't do.

For a moment there.....i lost myself in you,
For a moment.........there was nothing i couldn't do......for you.




Well? whatcha think?
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