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Old 05-31-2004, 09:41 PM
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Nice rhyme scheme, i thought it was gonna be A, B, C, B all the way through, but you got me in the middle, nice turn around ending...


You know there is a lyric thread in the music forum for people who write lyrics here, it would be cool to have more poems in there, i mean if you have any others lying around or anything....nice work....
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