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Haha- that was great! Very well done. Very descriptive- I could see every image you describe and I could feel the emotions you describe as well. I was surprised by the ending.
This could stand alone as a "mini-story" and it would also make a great beginning of a longer story or novel.
Job well done, man. Keep at it!
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