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Not to be an asshole or anything, but this sounds weak.
What's with the food fascination? Tacos. Pizzas. What's next? Ho Hos?
Examine why you like films and filmmaking. Look at your favorite films. Examine their structure, characters and plotting and try again.
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Earl of Chesterfield
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Francis Bacon
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