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Old 03-21-2010, 11:42 AM
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Originally Posted by X¤MurderDoll¤X View Post
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not many people in this section ever will hear this, I liked your story.
My jaw dropped. Taking time to actually care for my characters was pretty hard to do. I'm seriously flattered right now.

*closes mouth* ok, I have another smoother story line in mind for my promised rewrite, check back in later this week. I will be keeping it to 1000 words, because the challenge is important, for all the same reasons you guys have mentioned.

Thanks, MurderDoll.
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